First Place Thirty Points
heat wave
a child waters
the fire lily
Collin Barber
(1,6,15) = 30 Pts
Love the simplicity of this, with its similarities and contrasts . . . plus the delight of finding a child in the midst of it all.
Second Place Twenty-five Points
moon in the lilies
she asks me
to stay the night
Francine Banwarth
(3,4,8) = 25 Pts
With the moon in (not "on") the lilies, an invitation no one could reject.
Third place Twenty-four Points
ikebana
just a lily
and a lily
max verhart
(2,6,6) = 24 Pts
As elegant as the thing it describes: the spirit of ikebana.
Fourth Place Eighteen Points
between me
and my dark reflection
...a lily
Melissa Spurr
(1,4,7) = 18 Pts
There is wabi/sabi here in the beauty of the lily, though passing, like the saint, leaves behind an odor of sanctity.
Fifth Place Sixteen Points
spring moon
the silence of lilies
on the night table
Israel Lopez Balan
(0,3,10) = 16 Pts
Sixth Place Fifteen Points
finishing breakfast
the lily on the table
loses a petal
Paul O. Williams
(0,4,7) = 15 Pts
church graveyard
from nowhere at all
the fragrance of lily
Gautam Nadkarni
(0,5,5) = 15 Pts
As good haiku should do, this captures a moment in time.
Seventh Place Fourteen Points
full milk moon
the curve
of a calla lily
Devika
(1,3,5) = 14 Pts
Beautifully sensual, reminding of a woman's breast and that with a spiritual component. Excellent.
The curve and color of the moon and lily serve as lovely juxtapositions. Very sensual.
midsummer
the scent of lily
outlasts the day
tom painting
(0.2.10) = 14 Pts
The way the sounds of line 2 are recapitulated in line 3, especially the concentration of sounds in "outlasts."
Eighth Place Thirteen Points
around his tombstone
Lilies of the Valley
and a Bleeding Heart
gourdman
(2,1,5) = 13 Pts
I like the double meaning here.
stargazing
the scent of lilies
on a moonless night
Linda Papanicolaou
(0,3,7) = 13 Pts
Ninth Place Eleven Points
a toy boat
lost among water lilies
dragonflies
John Daleiden
(0,1,9) = 11 Pts
the lilies
he despised
now on his grave
Marlθne Buitelaar
(0,2,7) = 11 Pts
This shows how a haiku can be bigger than the moment; a lot is implied about the history between the mourner and departed.
Tenth Place Ten Points
almost dusk ...
a white lily
brightens the porch
Carol Raisfeld
(1,0,7) = 10 Pts
Pond mirror:
the moon lies near
a water lily
Magdalena Dale
(1,0,7) = 10 Pts
picking lilies
her freckles darken
in the sunlight
Susan Constable
(1,3,1) = 10 Pts
Eleventh Place Nine Points
moving day
last of her lilies
on the tip of his nose
Lin Geary
(1,2,2) = 9 Pts
Twelfth Place Eighth Points
damaged
the dragonfly chooses
a water lily coffin
Carmel Lively Westerman
(0,2,4) = 8 Pts
dawn chill
a desert lily sways
on the breeze
Darrell Byrd
(1,2,1) = 8 Pts
darkening sky
the painter deepens the blue
of water-lily
Dorota Pyra
(0,2,4) = 8 Pts
reflected light
among water lilies
a sinking coin
Jerzy Malysz
(0,2,4) = 8 Pts
cool sunset
the lily
darkens
Jon Baldwin
(1,2,1) = 8 Pts
Cool, indeed.
hot afternoon
hummingbirds fan
the firecracker lilies
Nancy Nitrio
(0,1,6) = 8 Pts
Thirteenth Place Seven Points
into the lily sunlight
out of the lily an ant
w. f. owen
(1,1,2) = 7 Pts
A pleasant twist on Nick Virgilio's famous haiku, however this seems almost like alchemy with the lily as alchemist converting sunlight into perhaps a red ant.
calla lilies
a young bride changes
out of her dress
DeVar
(0,2,3) = 7 Pts
fresh lilies
at the funeral service
and grandpa so still
Glen Keener
(0,2,3) = 7 Pts
holding up beauty
with all its fingers
lily in the pond
john tiong chunghoo
(1,1,2) = 7 Pts
mothers day
bringing lilies
to her grave
Judith Gorgone
(0,0,7) = 7 Pts
on the white lily,
blue butterfly
missing a wing
Sean Perkins
(1,0,4) = 7 Pts
even in deep woods
the sun angles its way in
trout lilies
Shelley Krause
(0,3,1) = 7 Pts
lily
not quite where the silt
turns silver
Sue Stanford
(1,0,4) = 7 Pts
spring garden
stray kittens nestle
beneath a tiger lily
Tristan Coleridge
(0,1,5) = 7 Pts
Fourteenth Place Six Points
bending slightly
to the sun
the lily
Bill Hudson
(0,2,2) = 6 Pts
Excellent example of simplicity of language and a subtle image, we are not told what to think or feel.
This morning
all the garden is white ...
lilies in bloom
Don Basilio
(0,2,2) = 6 Pts
stargazers tonight the scent of him
Jennifer Corpe
(0,2,2) = 6 Pts
pajama party
some unopened buds
on the cluster lily
Laurene
(1,0,3) = 6 Pts
Small green frog
white water lily
one less fly.
Trevor Camp
(1,0,3) = 6 Pts
Fifteenth Five Points
spring sun
warms the old barn wall
still, the daylilies wait
April Serock
(0,2,1) = 5 Pts
another Easter
one more lily pot enters
her perennial garden
Audrey Downey
(0,1,3) = 5 Pts
tiger lilies
guarding
the old homestead
Beth Powell
(0,0,5) = 5 Pts
earth star
a water lily
in moonlight
Frances McCarthy
(0,0,5) = 5 Pts
pressed tiger lily
my diary records
our first kiss
Harvey Jenkins
(0,1,3) = 5 Pts
down the valley
a lonely traveler
bound for a lily
Keith Simmonds
(0,2,1) = 5 Pts
lilies blossoming
a leashless dog smells
some dung
Lech Szeglowski
(0,1,3) = 5 Pts
sunrise . . .
the water-lily's
breakfast
Mary Davila
(1,0,2) = 5 Pts
starry night
the garden is lighted
by the white lily
miorita
(0,1,3) = 5 Pts
koi pond
a water lily brooding
over shadows
Nancy Smith
(0,1,3) = 5 Pts
The use of 'brooding' is so very nice . . . allows me to feel the atmosphere as well as see the image.
around the lily
rain drops pound
the hissing pond
Neil Muscott
(0,1,3) = 5 Pts
pink lilies
outside the grocery
she pauses
Ruth Powell
(0,0,5) = 5 Pts
Sixteenth Place Four Points
steeple bells
lilies-of-the-valley nod
in the fresh breeze
Catherine J.S. Lee
(0,1,2) = 4 Pts
Beautiful shasei, observation of what is and a fine seasonal picture.
heated argument
their peace lily
wilts
Leslie Montgomery
(0,0,4) = 4 Pts
lily pad
frog's diving board
splash!
Meredith Stern Cavalieri
(0,2,0) = 4 Pts
lilies in bloom
without her this year
misty morning
Pris Campbell
(0,0,4) = 4 Pts
dawn shower
the calla lily unfolds
her petal
Rita Odeh
(0,0,4) = 4 Pts
lily pads
this year the pond
so green
sakyu
(1,0,1) = 4 Pts
quiet garden
sipping a glass of wine
amaryllis blooms
terrytip
(0,1,2) = 4 Pts
Seventeenth Place Three Points
lily blooms~
in the eyes
of the newborn
Apurva
(0,0,3) = 3 Pts
the lovers' garden
a lily pad floats
on a cloud
Bill Kenney
(0,0,3) = 3 Pts
fishing opener
beside the trout lily
an empty creel
Edward
(0,1,1) = 3 Pts
a life long fight
against dangerous stamens
beautiful lily
emile molhuysen
((0,1,1) = 3 Pts
midsummer
hot even among
of snow-white lilies
Jacek M.
(0,0,3) = 3 Pts
Stargazer lilies
For Mother's Day
He doesn't call
meg
(0,1,1) = 3 Pts
sunday stroll
the lilies of the valley
revisited
og_a
(0,1,1) = 3 Pts
lily pond
the frog's eyes bob up
among the pads
RaV
(0,0,3) = 3 Pts
teardroplets
of a Tale Fairy
lilies-of-the-valley
Vasile Moldovan
(0,0,3) = 3 Pts