In the listing below, after each poem the author is listed, and then a three digit code revealing how many 3-point, 2-point, and 1-point votes were cast for this poem by the other participating poets.

(214 = 12) would indicate that the poem above received two 3-point votes, one 2-point vote, and four 1-point votes.

October 2002 Kukai Results
Kigo Theme: Blackbird
Free Format Theme: Lamp


First Place - 21 points

Sunset deepens . . .
blackbirds on the lawn
become the darkness

karma tenzing wangchuk
(336 = 21)



Second Place -- 17 points

north wind ~
the blackbird's steady gaze
as I shovel coal

sheila windsor
(235 = 17)



Third Place -- 15 points

preschool drawing
the blackbird bigger
than a cow

Cindy Tebo
(136 = 15)



Fourth Place -- 13 points

twilight
the black bird's silence from tree to tree

martin
(142 = 13)

first raindrops
blackbirds chatter in
the dry reeds

Darrell Byrd
(134 = 13)



Fifth Place -- 10 points

blackbirds singing
nuns call the children
into school

kathi rudawsky
(034 = 10)

full moon
blackbirds fill in
the oak tree

w.f. owen
(034 = 10)



Sixth Place -- 9 points

long shadows-
a flock of blackbirds
move as one

Pardee
(033 = 9)



Seventh Place -- 8 points

pumpkin patch
two blackbirds resting
on the scarecrow

OwenB
(032 = 8)

Shiki's birthday--
a blackbird paces
the rooftop

e keener
(113 = 8)



Eighth Place -- 7 points

after the storm
a pair of blackbirds
patrol the lawn

Sue
(104 = 7)

blackbird
standing in the grass we meet
eye to eye

gillena cox
(023 = 7)



Ninth Place -- 6 points

patting her tummy
she watches the blackbird
build a nest

Betty
(006 = 6)

autumn afternoon
the tall trees tremble
with blackbirds

Gene Williamson
(014 = 6)



Tenth Place -- 5 points

blackbirds
huddled on branches
storm warning

James M. Thompson
(013 = 5)

first snow
the fluttering of blackbirds
in the apple tree

DeVar
(013 = 5)



Eleventh Place -- 4 points

At the feeder,
still squawking to be fed--
the fledgling blackbird.

george
(012 = 4)

lavender bush
early afternoon gleam
a blackbird's beak

Alan Summers
(012 = 4)

desert pond ~
blackbird footprints frozen
in dried mud

Peter
(012 = 4)

the blackbird
covered with oil
gets a bubble bath

peigi
(012 = 4)

across the courtyard
a flock of blackbirds leaving
one behind

Naia
(101 = 4)

crystallized snow--
the blackbird pecks
a few leftover crumbs

Kathy Lippard Cobb
(012 = 4)

ripe sunflowers -
swaying on the bent stem
a blackbird

Carol Raisfeld
(020 = 4)

blackbird
the observed
observes

soji
(012 = 4)



Twelfth Place -- 3 points

freshly landscaped yard
first arrivals
two blackbirds

Janet Parker
(011 = 3)

the watery rustle
of poplars in the wind
a blackbird fusses

Celia Crook
(011 = 3)

dinner for one
a blackbird sings
and I smile

Mary Duggan
(011 = 3)

October rain--
over and over she sings
"Bye, Bye, Blackbird"

Billie Wilson
(003 = 3)



First Place -- 16 points

October night
the neighbor’s bug lamp catches
nothing but snow

OwenB
(137 = 16)



Second Place -- 15 points

bedside vigil-
the flickering light
of a small lamp

Pardee
(063 = 15)



Third Place -- 14 points

on grandma's brass lamp
three generations
of fingerprints

Cindy Tebo
(038 = 14)



Fourth Place -- 10 points

sound of sleet
raising the wick
on the lamp

w.f. owen
(042 = 10)

by the lamp
the curve of her breast
in silhouette

James M. Thompson
(034 = 10)

lines of street lamps
a meteor streaks
towards the horizon

Celia Crook
(131 = 10)

in the glow
of the tiffany lamp -
her softness

Carol Raisfeld
(123 = 10)



Fifth Place -- 9 points

cold rain--
a glow from the lamp
leads me home

Kathy Lippard Cobb
(114 = 9)

cold autumn night--
the lamp in your window
more welcome than stars

Billie Wilson
(114 = 9)

lunch with a friend
we each slant our menu
toward the lamp

Joann
(033 = 9)



Sixth Place -- 8 points

my favorite lamp
rebuked at the
yardsale

Janet Parker
(113 = 8)

last fireflies
winking away summer
their lamps dimming

Rose Marie Stutts
(113 = 8)

solstice--
a new lightbulb
for the old lamp

e keener
(113 = 8)



Seventh Place -- 7 points

lamp light's edge . . .
when did she begin
the leaving?

-Naia
(120 = 7)

wayward moth
powders the lamp
in wing dust

Mary Duggan
(112 = 7)

diffused lamplight--
a moth's shadow flickers
across the wall

Sue
(015 = 7)



Eighth Place -- 6 points

under a street lamp
two shadows
embrace

Betty
(022 = 6)

that rusty lamp
from the jumble sale ...
rub it just in case

sprite
(022 = 6)

reading lamp--
traces of dreams
under the pillow

DeVar
(111 = 6)



Ninth Place -- 5 points

coal oil lamp -
a moth circles
the globe

Darrell Byrd
(013 = 5)

hurricane warning
the keeper of lost art
grandpa trims each lamp's wick

Edward
(013 = 5)



Tenth Place -- 4 points

home across the field
the creak and sway of dad's
old hurricane lamp

sheila windsor
(012 = 4)

sunlight passes
through the prisms
of the antique lamp

Carmel C. Lively
(020 = 4)

soft lamplight--
the come hither
of her smile

Mary Lee McClure
(012 = 4)

out of the lamplight
the coffee cup
gone cold

Rob Scott
(020 = 4)



Eleventh Place -- 3 points

night table ~
curled ants and grey dust
below the lamp

Martin Gottlieb Cohen
(011 = 3)

children trick or treat
in festive costumes
A Pumpkin lamp grins

Linda M.Warner
(011 = 3)

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