1st Annual Poets' Choice Kukai

Thank you for participating in our First Annual kukai. Looking back on the first year that we moderated the kukai, we thought it would be nice to review the poems that you selected as winners on the monthly entries, and give you an opportunity to choose your favorite haiku of the year.

Congratulations to Carol Raisfeld, whose poem you chose as the best "kigo" entry of the year! She has been sent a $30 gift certificate to Amazon.com from Gary & Jennie.

Congratulations also to Andrea Gradidge, whose poem you chose as the best "free format" entry of the year! She also has received a $30 gift certificate to Amazon.com from Gary & Jennie.

Second place entries from OwenB and Nancy Smith will receive a haiku book that they select from Gary's Library of Duplicates.

The results of the voting have been tabulated and are listed below. As a special treat, our poets were invited to submit comments to accompany their votes. These comments can be viewed by clicking the "Comments" link following each poem.

Remember also as you look at the votes below that EACH of these poems has already been declared a winner by our poets in the monthly contests. Congratulations again to all of them!


In the listing below, after each poem the author is listed, and then a three digit code revealing how many 3-point, 2-point, and 1-point points were cast for this poem by the other participating poets.

(214 = 12) would indicate that the poem above received two 3-point votes, one 2-point vote, and four 1-point votes.

First Annual Kukai Results
Kigo Theme: various
Free Format Theme: various

First Place -- 26 Points

winter rain
one flowered umbrella
at the funeral

Carol Raisfeld
jan2003
(1,6,11) = 26
comments


Second Place -- 20 Points

morning fog
the creak of boats
at anchor

OwenB
may2003
(2,5,4) = 20
comments


Third Place -- 19 Points

morning fog
the sound the river makes
when I close my eyes

Marjorie Buettner
may2003
(1,5,6) = 19


Fourth Place -- 14 Points

mail call …
the scent of violets
from home

Carol Raisfeld
apr2003
(0,5,4) = 14

first day of school --
the bus slowly taken
by the morning fog

Peter H. Pache
may2003
(1,4,3) = 14
comments


Fifth Place -- 13 Points

on spread legs
the deer is drinking
it's reflection

Emile Molhuysen
nov2002
(2,2,3) = 13
comments


Sixth Place -- 10 Points

lalique hummingbird--
a thousand pieces
of scattered sun

Kathy Lippard Cobb
feb2003
(1,3,1) = 10
comments


Seventh Place -- 9 Points

storm clouds
a sunflower faces
the cracked earth

Darrell Byrd
aug2003
(0,2,5) = 9
comments

Sunset deepens . . .
blackbirds on the lawn
become the darkness

karma tenzing wangchuk
oct2002
(1,1,4) = 9

comments

the sun is setting -
even an ant on the wall
has a long shadow

Tomislav Maretic
jul2003
(3,0,0) = 9
comments


Eighth Place -- 8 Points

heavy frost
I lean deeper
into him

Naia
dec2002
(1,1,3) = 8

cloudy sky -
every sunflower looking
in another direction

Tomislav Maretic
aug2003
(0,2,4) = 8
comments

climbing over the fence
my younger sister
and honeysuckle

Deborah Russell
jun2003
(1,2,1) = 8
comments


Ninth Place -- 7 Points

deserted wharf
swept by winter rain--
the neon crab blinks

Ellen Compton
jan2003
(0,2,3) = 7
comments

after the funeral
the seeds she ordered
in today's mail

Roberta Beary
mar2003
(0,2,3) = 7


Tenth Place -- 6 Points

row of coral bells
a hummingbird
rings each one

OwenB
feb2003
(0,2,2) = 6
comments


Eleventh Place -- 5 Points

morning frost -
your long absence
deepens

Rob Scott
dec2002
(1,1,0) = 5
comments


Twelfth Place -- 4 Points

frost in the air
the line of swallows ends
with a sparrow

Johannes Manjrekar
dec2002
(0,1,2) = 4
comments

divorce papers
I pick the nuts out of
the waldorf salad

Carmel C. Lively
sep2002
(0,1,2) = 4

sunflowers~
my grand daughter leaps from
shadow to shadow

Deborah Russell
aug2003
(0,1,2) = 4

bamboo cage
a finch feeding seed
to the mirror

Darrell Byrd
mar2003
(0,1,2) = 4
comments

Gettysburg --
a stone hand reaches
through morning fog

Earl Keener
may2003
(0,0,4) = 4

deer tracks -
imagining my garden
beneath the snow

Carol Raisfeld
nov2002
(0,1,2) = 4
comments

red hibiscus
a hummingbird in place
above her ear

Darrell Byrd
feb2003
(0,2,0) = 4
comments


Thirteenth Place -- 3 Points

melted snow
where a ewe has slept
wild violets

Ray MacKenzie
apr2003
(0,1,1) = 3

almost bedtime…
one last walnut shell
ignites the embers

Sheila Windsor
sep2002
(0,1,1) = 3
comments

night clouds--
the blind man plucks an acorn
from his tin cup

Kathy Lippard Cobb
sep2002
(0,1,1) = 3

honeysuckle
a cloud of gnats drifts
over the pond

martin
jun2003
(0,0,3) = 3
comments

easing off the gas
wild sunflowers
on both sides now

mark e
aug2003
(0,1,1) = 3
comments

fog swirls
through the boat yard -
winter rain

Darrell Byrd
jan2003
(0,1,1) = 3
comments

afterward --
the scent of violets
in her lingerie

Carole MacRury
apr2003
(0,1,1) = 3
comments

sunflower seeds
scattered on the sidewalk
a homeless man

Deborah P Kolodji
aug2003
(0,0,3) = 3


First Place -- 19 Points

open windows
a lullaby sung
in Cantonese

Andrea Gradidge (ushi)
Jul2003
(1,7,2) = 19
comments


Second Place -- 13 Points

in my shadow
I see more deeply
into the water

Nancy Smith
Feb2003
(2,3,1) = 13
comments


Third Place -- 10 Points

her last canvas --
the artist captures
a fading sunset

Rosa Velt
jun2003
(0,4,2) = 10
comments

moving day
echoes in a house
no longer my home

Kate Creighton
jan2003
(0,2,6) = 10
comments


Fourth Place -- 9 Points

old desktop
the principal looks for
his initials

Jim Mullins
Aug2003
(0,3,3) = 9
comments

sketchpad --
sunlight inches
towards the fly

Martin
jun2003
(1,2,2) = 9
comments

winter night
an empty train disappears
into falling snow

Pamela Molhuysen
mar2003
(1,2,2) = 9
comments

sidewalk café -
an alley cat licks
spilled latte

Darrell Byrd
May2003
(1,2,2) = 9
comments


Fifth Place -- 8 Points

dried clay on his hands
the potter
rolls a cigarette

w.f. owen
jun2003
(1,1,3) = 8
comments

summer breeze ~
the clink of empty swings
circles the schoolyard

Deborah Russell
Aug2003
(1,2,1) = 8

pencil shavings--
the student's tongue
curls and uncurls

DeVar Dahl
Jun2003
(2,0,2) = 8
comments


Sixth Place -- 7 Points

garden sculptures
children strike poses
near a sunlit wall

Allen McGill
May2003
(0,2,3) = 7
comments

cobblestone alley
his cane
knows the way

w.f. owen
apr2003
(1,1,2) = 7
comments

summer music --
pebbles being carried
in and out with the tide

Rosa Velt
Jul2003
(0,2,3) = 7
comments

bicycling
through plum blossoms --
a sudden gust

Carole MacRury
mar2003
(0,2,3) = 7


Seventh Place -- 6 Points

cooler nights -
the curve of your back
nestled in mine

Carol Raisfeld
sep2002
(0,1,4) = 6
comments

light rain
the moving van
pulls away

Linda Papanicoulauo
Mar 2003
(0,2,2) = 6
comments

on the book cover
the same name
over and over

C. Lee Robinson
Aug2003
(1,0,3) = 6

the widow's house
window by window
lights go out

Carol Raisfeld
jan2003
(0,2,2) = 6
comments

on grandma's brass lamp
three generations
of fingerprints

Cindy Tebo
oct2002
(0,2,2) = 6

boundary waters
the cry of the loon
by my canoe

Deborah P. Kolodji
mar2003
(0,1,4) = 6
comments

spring rain --
we bicycle through
the scent of violets

Hortensia Anderson
mar2003
(1,0,3) = 6

cooler days
a fallen leaf twists
on a strand of web

Sue
sep2002
(0,3,0) = 6


Eighth Place -- 5 Points

campfire shadows--
pine smoke flavors
the pork and beans

DeVar Dahl
Feb2003
(0,1,3) = 5
comments

village heat--
a donkey's ear twitches
out of its hat

Martin
nov2002
(0,1,3) = 5
comments

autumn leaves -
children crowd around
the fallen nest

Carol Raisfeld
dec2002
(0,0,5) = 5
comments


Ninth Place -- 4 Points

first grader's scream
a pet snake
at show and tell

Carmel C. Lively
Aug2003
(0,1,2) = 4

October night
the neighbor's bug lamp catches
nothing but snow

OwenB
oct2002
(1,0,1) = 4

daybreak --
windows across the valley
turn rose gold

Hortensia Anderson
apr2003
(0,2,0) = 4
comments

summer garden--
frog and stone bathed
in moonlight

Sheila Windsor
May2003
(1,0,1) = 4

howling wind
an abandoned nest clings
to the moon

Rob Scott
dec2002
(0,1,2) = 4
comments

first school day
he hides his glasses
in the pocket

Tore Sverredal
Aug2003
(0,0,4) = 4


Tenth Place -- 3 Points

band practice night
the board approves a quote
for soundproofing

Andrea Gradidge (ushi)
Aug2003
(0,1,1) = 3

heatwave
the painful sound
of violin practice

Celia Crook
Jul2003
(0,1,1) = 3

comments

writing his name
with a lot of screeches
the new teacher

Emile Molhuysen
Aug2003
(0,0,3) = 3
comments

open house
laughter spills out
on the porch

Carmen Sterba
Jan2003
(0,0,3) = 3
comments

Sunday morning
in the steeple's shadow
virgin snow

Carol Raisfeld
feb2003
(0,1,1) = 3
comments

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