In the listing below, after each poem the author is listed, and then a three digit code revealing how many 3-point, 2-point, and 1-point votes were cast for this poem by the other participating poets.

(214 = 12) would indicate that the poem above received two 3-point votes, one 2-point vote, and four 1-point votes.

January 2003 Kukai Results
Kigo Theme: Winter Rain
Free Format Theme: House (or Home)


First Place - 27 points

winter rain
one flowered umbrella
at the funeral

Carol Raisfeld
(1.6.12 = 27)



Second Place - 16 points

fog swirls
through the boat yard -
winter rain

Darrell Byrd
(056 = 16)



Third Place - 11 points

deserted wharf
swept by winter rain--
the neon crab blinks

Ellen Compton
(302 = 11)



Fourth Place - 9 points

in winter rain
just the thought
of daffodils

Mary Lee McClure
(122 = 9)

a winter rain --
the fallen snowman
passes away

Peter H. Pache
(122 = 9)



Fifth Place - 8 points

Beethoven's Fifth–-
the winter rain reaches
a crescendo

Kathy Lippard Cobb
(113 = 8)



Sixth Place - 7 points

winter rain
the hum of power lines
across a northbound trail

gary
(023 = 7)

winter rain
a nose smudge
on the window

Marlene Egger
(112 = 7)

a pink slip
among the christmas cards
- winter rain

doris kasson
(104 = 7)

winter rain
gulls swim into
the hockey goal

Celia Crook
(031 = 7)



Seventh Place - 6 points

winter rain
dimples the snow
a yellow crocus

Allen McGill
(022 = 6)

winter rain sunday
my teenagers put on
fresh pajamas

-roberta beary
(103 = 6)

winter rain -
the fat snowman
- thinner

Angelee Deodhar
(103 = 6)

only sleet,hail,fog,
and snow so far.just one cure
for this winter, rain.

Donald Brooks
(111 = 6)

The snow is melted.
Water buds on rose petals.
Gifts of winter rain.

Rupert Rushin
(111 = 6)



Eighth Place - 5 points

winter rain
the cat watches snow slide
from bare branches

Kate Creighton
(021 = 5)

dating again--
winter rain freezes
on the highway

DeVar Dahl
(013 = 5)

winter rain
tastes of tears
as I walk alone- now

Rose Marie Stutts
(110 = 5)

winter rain --
a snowman
tips his hat

Betty Kaplan
(021 = 5)

winter rain --
the ice in my bourbon
slowly melts

hortensia anderson
(013 = 5)

winter rain
no one smiles
on the ski bus

Carmen Sterba
(005 - 5)



Ninth Place - 4 points

a wet dog whimpers
cold winter rain pours
the door remains closed

Carol Sircoulomb
(020 = 4)

winter rain
through the windshield wipers
brake lights

Linda P.
(012 = 4)

too old
for the menopause study -
winter rain

Joann
(004 = 4)

winter rain freezing
branches covered with ice
jingling in the wind

Jochen Hahn-Klimroth
(020 = 4)

dawn... puddle reflects
rolling clouds.Leaves drip water,
a soft winter rain.

Dillon Dyle
(101 = 4)

winter rain
the smell of canvas and smoke
inside our tent

OwenB
(012 = 4)



Tenth Place - 3 points

my old friend fades
her eyes drift sideways -
winter rain

Marylouise Knight
(003 = 3)

death of hope
no child conceived again . . .
winter rain

ron moss
(011 = 3)

too late
to stop foundation cracks
winter rain

Patricia A. Laurent
(003 = 3)

winter rain
the dragon headed downspout
spews gutter tea

Nancy Smith
(011 = 3)

the children asleep
she folds into me ...
winter rain

H. Gene Murtha
(003 = 3)

winter rain
the rehab center handrail
coated with ice

Earl Keener
(100 = 3)

winter rain
the sparkle of diamonds
in the ballroom

gillena cox
(011 = 3)

misty winter rain
the spider web catches
more and more droplets

Johannes Manjrekar
(003 = 3)



First Place - 15 points

moving day
echoes in a house
no longer my home

Kate Creighton
(133 = 15)



Second Place - 11 points

open house
laughter spills out
on the porch

Carmen Sterba
(035 = 11)



Third Place - 10 points

the widow's house
window by window
lights go out

Carol Raisfeld
(034 = 10)

lakefront home
winter deer settle
on the lawn

Allen McGill
(034 = 10)



Fourth Place - 9 points

following
one house to another --
the waxing moon

Betty Kaplan
(130 = 9)

old family home
the jumble of footprints
this way and that

sheila Windsor
(025 = 9)

winter tea house ~
her smile warmer than
the sake

Darrell Byrd
(025 = 9)

homemade bread--
a pound of butter
softens by the stove

DeVar Dahl
(033 = 9)



Fifth Place - 8 points

row houses
one after another until
the yellow door

OwenB
(113 = 8)

evening snow
the dark shapes of people
on their way home

--Bruce Ross
(024 = 8)

housesitting
the cat and i
watch the canary

karina klesko
(024 = 8)



Sixth Place - 7 points

detention home
a girl plays hopscotch behind
the barbed wire fence

Angèle Lux
(015 = 7)

home alone
this habit of steeping
two cups of tea

Joann
(015 = 7)



Seventh Place - 6 points

good habits re-post
like a dependable fence.
my home is my heart

Donald Brooks
(111 = 6)

home alone
uncorking the wine
saved for company

-roberta beary
(022 = 6)

postcard home
the squashed sandfly
tells a story

Celia Crook
(022 = 6)

Young architect,
another window added
to the gingerbread house

Florence
(014 = 6)

empty house --
the walls colored by
memories

Peter H. Pache
(014 = 6)

on the way home -
wild honeysuckle curves
along the back road

hortensia anderson
(103 = 6)



Eighth Place - 5 points

after our breakup . . .
the path home blinking
with fireflies

Kathy Lippard Cobb
(005 = 5)

new house
after a few days
smells of home

Deborah Watson
(102 = 5)

my closet ...
the temporary home
for her kittens again

pam molhuysen
(013 = 5)

climbing past
the scents of soy, cabbage, and gefilte fish
- home at last

doris kasson
(021 = 5)

back at home
after the funeral
the clock´s tick

Dietmar Tauchner
(005 = 5)



Ninth Place - 4 points

home alone
the clock ticks
louder

gillena cox
(020 = 4)

heading home . . .
i tell him the glimmer
is the morning star

Ellen Compton
(012 = 4)

moonlight snow
my house
a fairy dream

Rose Marie
(101 = 4)

Chipmunk's abandoned
squirrel house has new residents,
It's now an ant farm

Dillon Dyle
(101 = 4)

Overgrown lawn.Bare
rooms.My house in darkness. Ma's
dead...blank mirrors

Rupert Rushin
(101 = 4)



Tenth Place - 3 points

snow-flurried dawn -
the house and the cypress
in each other's arms

Visnja
(100 = 3)

house for sale
by elderly couple
winter

Patricia A. Laurent
(003 = 3)

wisp of chimney smoke—
mountain home emerges from
its cocoon of snow

Linda P.
(011 = 3)

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