This was a stand-out month for the kukai and for a few reasons. First we would like to extend our appreciation and thanks to the many who complimented the kigo and free format entries for their high quality. We can't credit the topic choices, it was your work!
Secondly, a few poets offered comments and we formatted those with the results. We'd like to encourage this. More discussion please! If you offer enough comments to make it unwieldy to include with results, we'd be delighted to put up a supplement page for the workshops.
Lastly, we had another high voter turnout. !!THANK YOU!!
Here are the results for the MAY 006 Kukai, wherein our Kigo subject was "LONG DAY" and our Free Format subject was "BUCKET OR PAIL".
The haiku are listed in order of total points received from voters. The numbers reflect the number of voters who gave the haiku either three points, two points, or one point -- followed by the total points for all votes.
Those who were given less than three points and who requested anonymity in such a case are so noted.
We pulled one kigo entry at the author's request.
The results of the voting have been tabulated and are listed below.
Congratulations to Scott Metz, the winner of our Kigo section, and to Kathy Lippard Cobb, the winner of our Free Format section!
(214 = 12) would indicate that the poem above received two 3-point votes, one 2-point vote, and four 1-point votes.
Long Day |
Bucket or Pail |
First Place -- 26 pts long day— she washes tomorrow's rice in the dark
Scott Metz
Second Place -- 19 pts long day the dog's chain wrapped around the tree
Earl Keener
Third Place -- 16 pts long day— grandma takes a second nap
Zhanna P. Rader
Fourth Place -- 15 pts long day— the snake curled in a rooster's shadow
dustin neal
a long day
doris kasson
Fifth Place -- 14 pts his last shingle covers a spot of moonlight... the long day
ed markowski Comment: wish I had more points to give to this one. It is totally excellent! Perfect ah-ha moment
Sixth Place -- 12 pts the long day in the widow's eyes longer still
Darrell Lindsey
Seventh Place -- 11 pts long day the lover's share a pull of saltwater taffy
Tom Painting
Eighth Place -- 10 pts long day— the night cricket on all channels
Lorin
another long day
angelee deodhar
Ninth Place -- 9 pts long day the edge of the road blurred by rain
Laryalee Fraser
long day . . .
Kala Ramesh
a long day—
Linda Marucci
long day...
Paul R
Tenth Place -- 8 pts long day counting pearls on her string
Denise Lizarraga
after a long day
Kate Creighton
long day
susan delphine delaney
after the long day
Maria Kowal
long day
Allan Burns
long day
max verhart
Eleventh Place -- 7 pts long day grape tendrils reach and curl
Mark Hollingsworth
long day
Grzegorz Sionkowski
long day
Bill Kenney
long day
-- ushi
long day
lucindab
long day ...
shanna
broken mower
Dave Bacharach
the long day
Ruth Franke
long day—
Israel López Balan
Twelfth Place -- 6 pts longest day— the faded blinds of the old people's home
Paul Hodder
one hatched egg
smzang
long day—
Vaughn Seward
Thirteenth Place -- 5 pts long day— happy to see my old friends, the earthworms
--Irene Golas
long day
RaV
stick by stick
Suzume Shi
long day . . .
Kathy Lippard Cobb
a long day —
---Derwisz
long day —
Warren Gossett
the long day
Barbara Campitelli
long day—
Paul Hunter
long day
j blain
long day
polona o.
Fourteenth Place -- 4 pts long day . . . frustration wrinkles across his forehead
Marie Summers
a long day...
---baldhead
a long rainy day—
D.V.Rozic
a long day
Edward
long rainy day —
Origa
Fifteenth Place -- 3 pts spring wedding a cold, gray drizzle makes for a long day
soji
above the road
Chandra Bales
waiting...
Rose Marie Stutts, EdD
long day
Petar Tchouhov
long day
martin
long day
Mary Stevens
long day —
Bruce Feingold
"Just thought I'd say that this was the best bunch of kigo haiku I've seen from the list in a long time. Hard to vote!" "It was really difficult this month, lots of wonderful haikus (and at times, a decidedly western take on the kigo "long day"). It took some time to pare my choices down ..." "Thanks guys, a very interesting mixture of ideas..." "Thanks. This kigo produced a lot of good poems." "tough choices as always" "All of these are great ..."
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First Place -- 29 pts sand pail . . . the toddler scoops the sea with a teaspoon
Kathy Lippard Cobb
Second Place -- 25 pts day's end a bunch of daisies in his bait pail
Tom Painting
Third Place -- 23 pts temple gate — a blind beggar’s pail fills with blossoms
Kala Ramesh
Fourth Place -- 21 pts old pea field — the rusted bucket full of grandpa's shadow
dustin neal
Fifth Place -- 18 pts sheet lightning the upside down bucket starts drumming
RaV "Very best of the bucket turned musical instrument ku, show don't tell"
Sixth Place -- 17 pts an empty pail I too am lonely
smzang
old bucket
William M. Gottlieb "Wonderful... gets the point across! Awesome!"
Seventh Place -- 16 pts carwash — a butterfly circles the yellow pail
Israel López Balan "Good example of show, don't tell. Butterfly looking for water."
Eighth Place -- 13 pts Hong Kong market — the scraping of crab claws in the pail
Beverley George
adobe bucket
martin
Ninth Place -- 12 pts new moon the old pail empty
Petar Tchouhov
Tenth Place -- 10 pts after the vet's squeaky toys silent in the red pail
roberta beary "...sad, but well written"
hard rain
Melanie Alberts
night rain
polona o.
window cleaning
-- lucindab "cute and funny"
Eleventh Place -- 9 pts corner florist — last lily in his pail sold for a kiss
~Devika
murky day —
Origa
Twelfth Place -- 8 pts home from vacation the ocean's smell clings to the toy pail
Agnes Eva Savich
two earthworms
--Irene Golas "Delightful! Reader gets put into the composter's position of seeing the earthworm's as having a forced moving day."
late afternoon —
Tristan Coleridge
Thirteenth Place -- 6 pts end of day pink sand pail floating in the tide pool
Denise Lizarraga
enchanting
john tiong chunghoo
dinner in a bucket . . .
Marie Summers
stopping to rest —
Paul Hodder
old wishing well —
Nancy Smith
Fourteenth Place -- 5 pts cat tails following the milk bucket trail of anticipation
shanna
grandpa's farm
soji
fresh paint
-Deborah P Kolodji
patchy grass
doris kasson
family picnic —
angelee deodhar
Fifteenth Place -- 4 pts bathing with a bucket and a cup — leader of the coup
citygirl "Absolutely fantastic. Definitely a "show don't tell", and concise! How the mighty have fallen! I can't say enough good things about this one."
first light
susan delphine delaney
the bucket hits
Tom
dented pail
max verhart
Sixteenth Place -- 3 pts little sand pail shako pretend trumpet... marching I watch her not the band
Rose Marie Stutts, EdD
fishing boats climb waves
Carole A. Borges
the gardener holds
Bruce Ross
beside his shoes
Chandra Bales
vernal equinox
-- Derwisz
phone call —
Laryalee Fraser
roadside fruit stand —
Zhanna P. Rader
home from the picnic
Paul R "Says it all. Best of the berry picking haiku."
a frog inhabits
Warren Gossett
summer night
Zeljka Vucinic-Jambresic
three day rain
Rap
grandpa’s house —
aom (tim)
"...this excellent batch of poems!" "Another good subject."
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