June 2005 Kukai

The results of the voting have been tabulated and are listed below. Congratulations to Kathy Lippard Cobb, the winner of our Kigo section, and to Lorin Ford, the winner of our Free Format section!


In the listing below, after each poem the author is listed, and then a three digit code revealing how many 3-point, 2-point, and 1-point points were cast for this poem by the other participating poets.

(214 = 12) would indicate that the poem above received two 3-point votes, one 2-point vote, and four 1-point votes.

June 2005 Kukai Results
Kigo Theme: Swim
Free Format Theme: Clouds
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First Place -- 28 Points
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moonlit swim . . .
the galaxy moves
around me

Kathy Lippard Cobb
(1,7,11) = 28 pts
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Second Place 
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swim meet
her eyes bluer
than the water

Earl Keener
(0,5,6) = 16 pts
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Third Place 
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after our swim
the taste of salt
on your body

Bill Kenney
(3,2,4) = 15 pts

mud puddle
a child teaches the worm
how to swim

Owen Burkhart
(1,3,6) = 15 pts

midnight swim--
every move
sparkles

Mary Lee McClure
(0,5,5) = 15 pts
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Fourth Place
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childhood swimming hole
on the dock her clothes
and new right leg

Edward
(0,5,3) = 13 pts
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Fifth Place
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leg cramp
on a solo swim--
the empty sky

Dave Bacharach
(1,1,6) = 11 pts

lingering heat
a firefly swims
in moonlight

Scott Mason
(0,3,5) = 11 pts
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Sixth Place
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river dusk
an old man & his puppy
swim upstream

ed markowski
(1,1,5) = 10 pts
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Seventh Place
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swimming?
in the miso soup
a mayfly

James M. Thompson
(1,2,2) = 9 pts

first swim
the fear to let go
of auntie's arm

john tiong chunghoo
(1,2,2) = 9 pts
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Eighth Place
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afternoon swim
in the lemonade...
a dead fly

Kate
(1,1,3) = 8 pts

afternoon swim
two discarded suits
in the gazebo

Deborah Kolodji
(0,3,2) = 8 pts

deep silence
in the old pond
a frog swims

max verhart
(0,1,6) = 8 pts
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Ninth Place
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no one home--
the gardener
takes a swim

Ami
(0,3,1) = 7 pts

new fish pond --
the cat
learns to swim

Lorin Ford
(0,2,3) = 7 pts

no life jackets
migrants swim the river
with all they own

Carmel C. Lively
(0,2,3) = 7 pts

swimming
down into darkness
my shadow

Jim Mullins
(0,1,5) = 7 pts
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Tenth Place
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canal bridge
the sound of a swimmer
in the night

martin
(1,1,1) = 6 pts

beyond the surf
a large shadow
swims closer

Hugh
(0,3,0) = 6 pts
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Eleventh Place
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a lost duckling
swims toward my voice:
twilight 

Irene Golas
((0,0,5) = 5 pts

I switch to breaststroke
the moon
swimming beside me

Mark Hollingsworth
(0,0,5) = 5 pts
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Twelfth Place
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heat wave
the swallow sips
a swimming pool

Alan Summers
(1,0,1) = 4 pts

summer breeze -
the laughter of children
in the swimming pool

Jim Swift
(1,0,1) = 4 pts

late spring -
the desire of river shad
to swim home

Audrey Downey
(0,2,0) = 4 pts

swarms
of swimming sperm
petri dish

Allen McGill
(0,2,0) = 4 pts

The fish in his tank
meets himself
no matter which way he swims.

Suzume Shi
(0,2,0) = 4 pts

campfire pancakes --
a red ant swimming
in syrup

Laryalee Fraser
(0,0,4) = 4 pts
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Thirteenth Place
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night swimming -
what else shares the deep cool
with my toes?

Nancy Smith
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

the wake
of a swimming Lab
ducklings

Ann K. Schwader
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

while the man swims
a cormorant stands guard
over his things

Richard Kay
(0,1,1) = 3 pts 

first swimming lesson
the chlorine sting
in my nose

--ushi
(0,0,3) = 3 pts

a frog swims
to the bottom of the creek--
final exam week

DeVar
(0,0,3) = 3 pts




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First Place
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sheep country --
passing clouds graze
the hilltop

Lorin Ford
(2,5,9) = 25 pts
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Second Place
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storm clouds
the tugboat moves deeper
into each wave

Owen Burkhart
(1,4,5) = 16 pts
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Third Place
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midsummer's eve
thick clouds erase
the moon

Marie
(1,3,4) = 13 pts
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Fourth Place
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funeral procession
all along the cloud's edge
a thin bright line

max verhart
(1,2,5) = 12 pts
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Fifth Place
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distant clouds
rain dancers stir
the parched earth

Carmel C. Lively
(0,2,6) = 10 pts

cloudy morning
the old blind man sings
without sunglasses

Israel López Balan
(0,2,6) = 10 pts
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Sixth Place
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horse in a field
the society
of clouds

William M. Gottlieb
(1,2,2) = 9 pts
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Seventh Place
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cloud cover--
the motionless hare
gone on second glance

Ami

(0,3,2) = 8 pts

passing clouds
shadows on the lawn
disappear

Bill Kenney
(1,1,3) = 8 pts

in the clouds,
an elephant becomes
a downpour

Kate
(1,0,5) = 8 pts

cloudy mass
the radiologist
says "aha"

--ushi
(0,1,6) = 8 pts
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Eighth Place
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prairie dust clouds
he shoots the lead buffalo
with his camera

Edward
(0,2,3) = 7 pts

cloud patterns --
a ladybug lands
on my notebook

Laryalee Fraser
(0,2,3) = 7 pts

family reunion
clouds too
in the viewfinder

Mark Hollingsworth
(0,2,3) = 7 pts

racing clouds
I place my money
on the dark horse

Laurice Markowski
(0,1,5) = 7 pts

cloudless sky
a plane overtakes
the kite

Hugh
(0,1,5) = 7 pts
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Ninth Place
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no phone call -
clouds form
over the Gulf

Francis Masat
(0,2,2) = 6 pts

clouds shapes
I fall in and out of
a dream

Earl Keener
(0,2,2) = 6 pts

cloudy day -
all flags fly
at half-mast

Grzegorz Sionkowski
(0,2,2) = 6 pts

vanishing too
in the rainbow
a nameless cloud

George Hawkins
(0,2,2) = 6 pts

hoe
over his shoulder
billowing clouds

Paul Pfleuger, Jr.
(0,2,2) = 6 pts

in the mirror
of the old well
traveling clouds

Zeljka Vucinic-Jambresic

(0,1,4) = 6 pts

scattered clouds:
a New Moon and Venus
almost touching

oino sakai
(0,1,4) = 6 pts

cloud shadows --
panting dog looks up
each time

Jim Mullins
(0,1,4) = 6 pts
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Eleventh Place
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sunset--
the clouds kiss the hills
goodnight

Dave
(0,2,1) = 5 pts

cumulus clouds -
sudden shafts of sunlight
hit the old farm

Audrey Downey
(0,2,1) = 5 pts

no clouds
clear to the mountains
sweet clover

Ann K. Schwader
(0,2,1) = 5 pts

hold your breath
to swim
the gnat cloud

Bill Tallmadge
(0,1,3) = 5 pts

mating season
the couple in the park
on cloud nine

flatline
(0,1,3) = 5 pts

crossing the border
with me
mooncloud

roberta beary
(0,1,3) = 5 pts
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Twelfth Place
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plowed fields
each row holding rain
clouds

Scott Metz
(1,0,1) = 4 pts

the Louvre pyramid--
we rendezvous
with clouds

Scott Mason
(0,2,0) = 4 pts

spring chill
a cloud's shadow moves
over the lake

martin
(0,1,2) = 4 pts

moonlit clouds
a gypsy band warms up
in the old dance hall

ed markowski
(0,1,2) = 4 pts

morning zazen
clouds in the lake
come and go

Zeta
(0,1,2) = 4 pts

rafts adrift
on a cloud-filled lake
hint of divorce

Allen McGill
(0,1,2) = 4 pts

summer sky--
way way up there
that tiny cloud

Mary Lee McClure
(0,0,4) = 4 pts
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Thirteenth Place
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The dog thunders up
from his swim a grinning
cloud on legs.

Suzume Shi
(1,0,0) = 3 pts

clouded fortune
in the teacup's bottom
too many leaves

Zaida Lysle
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

cloud wisp . . .
the shape of what used to be
a lizard

Kathy Lippard Cobb
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

clouds and stones
both the wind and the sculptor
whistling merrily

Petar Tchouhov
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

clouds at night
flying over
my dream

sérgio francisco pichorim
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

low clouds -
white flashes from
startled juncos

Jim Swift
(0,0,3) = 3 pts



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