February 2006 Kukai

The results of the voting have been tabulated and are listed below. Congratulations to Bill Kenney, the winner of our Kigo section, and to Darrell Byrd, the winner of our Free Format section!


In the listing below, after each poem the author is listed, and then a three digit code revealing how many 3-point, 2-point, and 1-point points were cast for this poem by the other participating poets.

(214 = 12) would indicate that the poem above received two 3-point votes, one 2-point vote, and four 1-point votes.

February 2006 Results
Kigo Theme: Early Thaw
Free Format Theme: Sunlight

First Place -- 32 pts
early thaw--
the earth tugging
at my footsteps

Bill Kenney
(2,7,12) = 32 pts


Second Place -- 28 pts
early thaw--
walking the long way home
to hear the brook

angelee deodhar
(2,6,10) = 28 pts


Third Place -- 27 pts
early thaw
the hedge alive
with twitter

oga
(1,7,10) = 27 pts


Fourth Place -- 23 pts
early thaw--
at the school bus stop
a red mitten

Betty Kaplan
(1,8,4) = 23 pts


Fifth Place -- 20 pts
early thaw...
for a moment
mother remembers my name

ed markowski
(1,4,9) = 20 pts


Sixth Place -- 18 pts
early thaw--
the pot on the snowman's head
gets bigger and bigger

Tom
(1,4,7) = 18 pts


Seventh Place -- 16 pts
early thaw--
a footprint on ice
drifting away

Odu Kim
(1,2,9) = 16 pts


Eighth Place -- 13 pts
early thaw
marsh mud glistens
in the rowboat

Martin
(0,2,9) = 13 pts

early thaw
the children armed
with icicle swords

Earl Keener
(0,2,9) = 13 pts


Ninth Place -- 11 pts
early thaw
the smell of wet bark
fills the air

Grzegorz Sionkowski
(1,1,6) = 11 pts


Tenth Place -- 10 pts
early thaw
a white lie about
the snowman's fate

RaV
(0,1,8) = 10 pts


Eleventh Place -- 9 pts)
early thaw
they put off
the divorce

Dave Bacharach
(1,0,6) = 9 pts


Twelfth Place -- 8 pts
early thaw
ironing out the folds
of her floral tablecloth

Beverley George
(2,0,2) = 8 pts

early thaw--
faintly the waitress
smiles at me

max verhart
(1,0,5) = 8 pts

early thaw
a street person looks
for lost coins

--Irene Golas
(0,1,6) = 8 pts

early thaw
sounds of a rolling marble
across the wood floor

Denise Lizarraga
(0,0,8) = 8 pts


Thirteenth Place -- 7 pts
early thaw
fog covers the fields
covered with snow

Fr.RP
(1,1,2) = 7 pts

early thaw
a stiff wing
in the black snow

Agnes Eva Savich
(0,1,5) = 7 pts

early thaw--
slowly filling up
the baptistery

Dustin Neal
(0,2,3) = 7 pts

early thaw
a dead spider floats
in the bucket

Meredith
(0,2,3) = 7 pts

one crocus
for my Valentine
early thaw

kokoumolou
(0,2,3) = 7 pts

rock garden
a stone toad appears
early thaw

Edward
(0,3,1) = 7 pts

early thaw
crocuses appear outside
the flower shops

Citygirl
(0,1,5) = 7 pts

early thaw
standing in line
for seed potatoes

Paul R
(0,1,5) = 7 pts


Fourteenth Place -- 6 pts
early thaw
she opens
the long sealed letter

Keiko Izawa
(1,1,1) = 6 pts

ice skating outfit
covered with mud and tears
early thaw

Barbara Curry
(1,0,3) = 6 pts

Eight sparrows
at a full birdbath--
early thaw.

Trevor Camp
(1,0,3) = 6 pts

early thaw
her white bathrobe
missing

Petar Tchouhov
(0,2,2) = 6 pts

early thaw--
snowman's body parts
piled on the lawn

Richmond Williams
(0,1,4) = 6 pts

early thaw:
my ice-fishing shanty
has sunk

-- lucindab
(0,1,4) = 6 pts

a droplet
waits at the sprig tip
early thaw

greg lammers
(0,1,4) = 6 pts


Fifteenth Place -- 5 pts
early thaw
she brings up the least
of my worries

Tom Painting
(1,0,2) = 5 pts

early thaw--
beer cans afloat
in the esky

lorin
(0,1,3) = 5 pts

early thaw
down at the forest stream
new fairy shrimp

Paul O. Williams
(0,1,3) = 5 pts

early thaw--
a new seed catalogue
in the letterbox

---Skin
(0,1,3) = 5 pts

early thaw--
a robin's cracked
note

john tiong chunghoo
(0,0,5) = 5 pts

early thaw--
I pretend not to see
his smile

Marie
(0,0,5) = 5 pts

early thaw
the swelling lake nears
yesterdays footprints

Kylie Hooklyn
(0,0,5) = 5 pts

early thaw
the bruise on her arm
fading to yellow

Francine Banwarth
(0,0,5) = 5 pts


Sixteenth Place -- 4 pts
with or without
the groundhog's shadow
early thaw

--ushi
(1,0,1) = 4 pts

early thaw
the roses she thought
were from him

Deborah P Kolodji
(0,1,2) = 4 pts

cracked snow shovel
the almanac predicts
an early thaw

Laryalee Fraser
(0,1,2) = 4 pts

an early thaw
the flooded creek washes out
a small fleck of gold

Carmel Lively Westerman
(0,1,2) = 4 pts

early thaw--
he flings the blue crab
back into the bay

~K~
(0,1,2) = 4 pts

early thaw
drop by drop
beats the rhythm

Maria Kowal
(0,1,2) = 4 pts


Seventeenth Place -- 3 pts
early thaw
mending the prayer strip
in two places

Bruce Ross
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

early thaw--
raccoon tracks along
the creek bank

Darrell Byrd
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

the stranger casts
a warm smile
early thaw

Linda Chambers
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

early thaw
crocus blooming
through snow and mud

Rose Marie Stutts
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

early thaw
from under the snow
ashes of house

--Derwisz
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

early thaw
and the wood duck boxes
still uncleaned

Glen Keener
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

early thaw--
the Olympic skater
takes falsestart

Origa
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

early thaw--
this watery ring
becoming a pond

Ed Schwellenbach
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

early thaw--
in the tire tracks
dirty puddles

--Strange Little Being
(0,0,3) = 3 pts

under the eaves
the water drop by drop--
early thaw

Vasile Moldovan
(0,0,3) = 3 pts

early thaw -
my child's scooter
reveals itself

Zhanna P. Rader
(0,0,3) = 3 pts


First Place -- 17 pts
sunlight . . .
a wasp taps
at the window

Darrell Byrd
(0,4,9) = 17 pts


Second Place -- 16 pts
breaking wave
winter sunlight curls
into itself

martin
(1,3,7) = 16 pts


Third Place -- 15 pts
fading sunlight--
he takes off
his wedding ring

Laryalee Fraser
(0,4,7) = 15 pts


Fourth Place -- 14 pts
backs to the sunlight
the migrant workers break
for lunch

Carmel Lively Westerman
(1,3,5) - 14 pts


Fifth Place -- 13 pts
afternoon train
sunlight slants into the eyes
of a guide dog

Keiko Izawa
(0,4,5) = 13 pts

clear night
the moon's face
full of sunlight

RaV
(0,3,7) = 13 pts


Sixth Place -- 12 pts
open window-
in the bottom of my cup
sunlight

Betty Kaplan
(1,3,3) = 12 pts

dust
dancing in winter
sunlight

oga
(1,2,5) = 12 pts

in an empty bowl
two sets of chop sticks
sunlight on plum trees

Bill Hudson
(1,1,7) = 12 pts


Seventh Place -- 11 pts
winter sunlight--
the first hint of color
in my baby's eyes

Dejah Leger
(0,4,3) = 11 pts


Eighth Place -- 10 pts
a hole in
the woodpile
fills with sunlight

Linda Chambers
(1,2,3) = 10 pts

the eggs
comes to a slow boil
dappled sunlight

Tom Painting
(1,2,3) = 10 pts

shattered sunlight . . .
I pick myself up
in mirrored pieces

Kathy Lippard Cobb
(1,2,3) = 10 pts

morning sunlight--
the sparkles of my ring
in the front page news

Audrey Downey
(1,1,5) = 10 pts

morning sunlight
the dog's face
in my coffee

paula fisher
(0,4,2) = 10 pts

sunlight fades
through the chapel doors
final words

James M. Thompson
(0,3,4) = 10 pts

departing guest . . .
more room now
for sunlight

Ann K. Schwader
(0,2,6) = 10 pts


Ninth Place -- 9 pts
first warm day
pink sunlight
through eyelids

Mark Hollingsworth
(0,3,3) = 9 pts

that old dog
only moves when sunlight moves
across the room

Glen Keener
(0,3,3) = 9 pts

shaft of sunlight
in the potting shed--
the rustle of bulbs

Beverley George
(0,2,5) = 9 pts

winter sunlight--
the dog lays
on her back

Mary Chapman
(0,2,5) = 9 pts


Tenth Place -- 8 pts
dusk wind
reeds dance
with sunlight

john tiong chunghoo
(0,2,4) = 8 pts

winter tree--
branches clothed
in sunlight

Bill Kenney
(0,2,4) = 8 pts

cold sunlight--
empty nesters
on the treadmill

Bruce H. Feingold
(0,2,4) = 8 pts

early sunlight
a black dog sniffs
the long shadows

Israel López Balan
(0,1,6) = 8 pts


Eleventh Place -- 7 pts
morning sunlight
rainbows
on a blank page

shanna
(1,1,2) = 7 pts

winter sunlight,
acres of snow geese
in the fields

~K~
(0,1,5) = 7 pts


Twelfth Place -- 6 pts
sunlight
a sky blue morning glory
says it all

ed markowski
(0,2,2) = 6 pts

filtered sunlight--
something stirs
among the cypress knees

Ellen Compton
(0,2,2) = 6 pts

frozen sunlight--
a crow swears at the dog
from the oak branch

Origa
(0,2,2) = 6 pts

sudden sunlight--
giving the prism
another twirl

Francine Banwarth
(0,1,4) = 6 pts

February sunlight
turtles snooze
deep in the mud

Citygirl
(0,1,4) = 6 pts


Thirteenth Place -- 5 pts
the blond rinse
fading from her hair
morning sunlight

Deborah P. Kolodji
(1,0,2) = 5 pts

Echoes
of sunlight--
stained glass

kami
(0,1,3) = 5 pts

sunlight moves
across the exposed root --
a day at home

Marylouise Knight
(0,1,3) = 5 pts

March sunlight
on the couch a ball
a sleepy kittens

Edward
(0,1,3) = 5 pts

winter sunlight--
the rooftop snow
silent

j blain
(0,1,3) = 5 pts

"press three for. . ."
sunlight recedes across
the desk

Dave Bacharach
(0,0,5) = 5 pts

mountain pines
their snow caps
in sunlight

--ushi
(0,0,5) = 5 pts


Fourteenth Place -- 4 pts
frozen sunlight
in the icicles - on the ditch
frozen wind

max verhart
(0,2,0) = 4 pts

sunlight sparkles
ladybugs-- wintering
on the windowsill

Rose Marie Stutts
(0,1,2) = 4 pts

science lesson:
a beam of sunlight
through a prism

--lucindab
(0,1,2) = 4 pts

a wide crack
widened by sunlight
frozen river

Chandra Bales
(0,1,2) = 4 pts

in the sunlight--
a cat with a mandala
on his forehead

Ami
(0,1,2) = 4 pts


Fifteenth Place -- 3 pts
flower garden
full of sunlight and water--
the smell of dung

Fr. R.P.
(1,0,0) = 3 pts

Sunlight slants through springtime
trees; what would the dead give
for a moment of this?

Michael Doherty
(1,0,0) = 3 pts

catching the sunlight
a rainbow lorikeet soars
in the kite's talons

cate juno
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

poor blossoms
on the little tree--
winter sunlight

Linda Marucci
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

warm sunlight
the dog twitches
canine dreams

-sakyu-
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

sunlight
seeps through the pines -
this lace of shadows

Zhanna P. Rader
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

sunlight
through the maples leaves
fleeting shadows

--Irene Golas
(0,0,3) = 3 pts

argument
shards of sunlight
pierce the air

Meredith
(0,0,3) = 3 pts

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