August 2005 Kukai

The results of the voting have been tabulated and are listed below. Congratulations to Ed Markowski, the winner of our Kigo section, and to Laryalee Fraser, the winner of our Free Format section!


In the listing below, after each poem the author is listed, and then a three digit code revealing how many 3-point, 2-point, and 1-point points were cast for this poem by the other participating poets.

(214 = 12) would indicate that the poem above received two 3-point votes, one 2-point vote, and four 1-point votes.

August 2005 Kukai Results
Kigo Theme: Waterfall
Free Format Theme: Door

First Place -- 30 pts


only the waterfall
just as it was...
second honeymoon

ed markowski
(3,6,9) = 30 pts


Second Place -- 28 pts


sunset--
the waterfall
on fire

Mary Lee McClure
(1,7,11) = 28 pts


Third Place -- 21 pts


down sunlit rocks
pulling a river behind it
the waterfall

Bill Kenney
(2,2,11) = 21 pts


Fourth Place -- 18 pts


roaring waterfall
everybody shouts
but a deaf couple

Flatline
(3,2,5) = 18 pts


Fifth Place -- 17 pts


waterfall
a rainbow ripples
through her fingers

Abigail
(2,3,5) = 17 pts


Sixth Place -- 16 pts


waterfall
her long hair
straightens

w. f. owen
(2,2,6) = 16 pts


Seventh Place -- 12 pts


through the roar
of the waterfall--
first cricket

Irene Golas
(1,2,7) = 12 pts

her hair
under the waterfall
a black cascade

Ella W.
0,3,6) = 12 pts


Eighth Place -- 11 pts


waterfall . . .
our voices drown
in the noise

Kathy Lippard Cobb
(0,1,9) = 11 pts


Ninth Place -- 10 pts


quiet stream
over the waterfall
into song

Mark Hollingsworth
(1,2,3) = 10 pts

zen fountain--
the kitten's tongue catches
the waterfall trickle

Brenda Roberts
(0,3,4) = 10 pts


Tenth Place -- 9 pts


glinting in the sunlight
the dragonfly and
the waterfall

sakyu
(2,0,3) = 9 pts

august moon
a halo arches above
the waterfall

Darrell Byrd
(1,1,4) = 9 pts


Eleventh Place -- 8 pts


last summer's photo
by the waterfall--
misty eyes

Laryalee Fraser
(0,0,8) = 8 pts


Twelfth Place -- 7 pts


the waterfall
holds on to its rainbow--
scent of yarrow

Zhanna P. Rader
(1,1,2) = 7 pts

summer grass
a tombstone faces
the waterfall

Israel López Balan
(0,1,5) = 7 pts


Thirteenth Place -- 6 pts


winter wind. . .
the waterfall freezes
in descent

Marie Summers
(1,0,3) = 6 pts

meditation--
listening to a waterfall
in miniature

Barbara Campitelli
(0,2,2) = 6 pts

drop by drop ...
the waterfall counts
the whole night

Zeljka Vucinic-Jambresic
(0,2,2) = 6 pts

cool breeze
the waterfall's scent
through the trees

martin
(0,1,4) = 6 pts


Fourteenth Place -- 5 pts


Temple garden wall--
Zen monks sit in the coolness:
A dry waterfall

Linda Marucci
(1,0,2) = 5 pts

frozen waterfall--
a piece of canoe
juts out

Dave Bacharach
(0,2,1) = 5 pts

spring thaw--
the roar of the waterfall
raises our voices

Glen Keener
(0,1,3) = 5 pts

summer solstice
with my back to the waterfall
I lip-read her "yes"

Petar Tchouhov
(0,1,3) = 5 pts


Fifteenth Place -- 4 pts


a small rainbow
suspended in a waterfall
late summer clouds

Bruce Ross
(0,1,2) = 4 pts

stopping med-step
in the autumn forest...
waterfall!

Paul R
(0,1,2) = 4 pts

oppressive heat
the waterfall cools
an eagle's shadow

Owen Burkhart
(0,1,2) = 4 pts

waterfall trail--
young lovers
lap the old

Ami
(0,1,2) = 4 pts

waterfall pool--
a sand monitor joins me
on the hot rock

lorin ford
(0,0,4) = 4 pts

dry waterfall
moss-covered graffiti
on the rock face

Deborah P Kolodji
(0,0,4) = 4 pts

limestone cave
we're surrounded by echoes
of the waterfall

--ushi
(0,0,4) = 4 pts


Sixteenth Place -- 3 pts


sooner, sooner,
waterfalling
drops and sun

Ginka Biliarska
(1,0,0) = 3 pts

thunder--
mist churns beneath
the waterfall

Allen McGill
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

last day of vacation--
skipping stones
into the waterfall

aom (tim)
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

scent of pine trees--
mist from the waterfall
covers my glasses

DeVar
((0,1,1) = 3 pts


First Place -- 26 pts


ten years drought--
he closes the barn door
for the last time

Laryalee Fraser
(3,3,11) = 26 pts


Second Place -- 23 pts


childhood lane
strange people stare from
familiar doors

john tiong chunghoo
(2,6,5) = 23 pts


Third Place -- 15 pts


porch light
moths gather
at the front door

Marie Summers
(1,3,6) = 15 pts


Fourth Place -- 14 pts


sunlight
through the open door
choir practice

Allen McGill
(1,2,7) = 14 pts

doggy door--
a toddler follows
his furry friend

shane gilreath
(0,3,8) = 14 pts

family visit--
the bedroom door closes
with a sigh

Ami
(0,4,6) = 14 pts


Fifth Place -- 13 pts


through the open door
I eavesdrop on my mother
talking to sunlight

Linda Marucci
(0,3,7) = 13 pts

locked ward
moonlight seeps under
the door

lorin ford
(0,5,1) = 13 pts

abandoned house
sunlight ends
at the open door

martin
(1,2,6) = 13 pts


Sixth Place -- 11 pts


first argument
only a light under
the bathroom door

Carmel Lively Westerman
(0,2,7) = 11 pts


Seventh Place


front door--
a wreath replaces
Support Our Troops

Dave Bacharach
(0,1,7) = 9 pts

new house
the front door handle
on the wrong side

Flatline
(1,0,6) = 9 pts

new wreath
the old door
looks older

sakyu
(0,2,5) = 9 pts


Seventh Place -- 8 pts


fetching newspaper
barefooted and in pajamas
the front door clicks

Audrey Downey
(0,2,4) = 8 pts

he always knows
when the door is open--
that old fly

Barbara Campitelli
(0,2,4) = 8 pts


Eight Place -- 7 pts


man lives between
leaving and entering
the same door

emile molhuysen
(1,1,2) = 7 pts

enlightenment
the door leading to
the church parking lot

ed markowski
(0,2,3) = 7 pts

sleepless night
the familiar sound
of a door

CaMILA
(0,2,3) = 7 pts

twilight--
the open door
and fireflies

Mary Lee McClure
(0,1,5) = 7 pts


Ninth Place -- 6 pts


sign
on the hospital chapel
please use other door

Paul R
(1,1,1) = 6 pts

the young dog
goes to the door
an old man sighs

Gary Ford
(0,3,0) = 6 pts

sunset
the screen door screen
joins the night

Scott Mason
(0,2,2) = 6 pts


Tenth Place -- 5 pts


after sunset
the wood door creaks
even closed

ZZZeta
(1,1,0) = 5 pts

a green marsh
a frog jumps in
through an invisible door

Zeljka Vucinic-Jambresic
(1,0,2) = 5 pts

Up on the screen door
that damn scrawny cat again
smelling our chicken.

Horst Ludwig
(1,0,2) = 5 pts

police tape
a torn screen door
off its hinge

Deborah P Kolodji
(1,0,2) = 5 pts

crime scene--
a door to the past
in a strand of hair

Jim Swift
(0,2,1) = 5 pts

refrigerator door closes softly
prom corsage saved
for another day

Janet Parker
(0,2,1) = 5 pts


Eleventh Place -- 4 pts


hot summer day
stuck in mid-track
the sliding screen door

Peggy Heinrich
(0,2,0) = 4 pts

hollowed doorstep
laughter spills
from a lighted window

Beverley George
((0,2,0) = 4 pts

my dog's name
the sound of a door
opening

Laura Orabone
(0,1,2) = 4 pts

wayfarer...
in the sleet-filled night
an open door

Nancy Smith
(0,1,2) = 4 pts

dawn seeps
through the screen door
fresh skunk

Ann K. Schwader
(0,1,2) = 4 pts

basement door--
a Hitchcock movie
fades to black

Kathy Lippard Cobb
(0,0,4) = 4 pts

cardboard house
a sheet of plastic
for their front door

Owen Burkhart
(0,0,4) = 4 pts


Twelfth Place -- 3 pts


door closed,
door open ...
door cracked

Lise OC
(1,0,0) = 3 pts

the thin sound
of a screen door closing--
wisps of cloud

Bill Kenney
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

Evening stillness
The door
Rests ajar

Anton
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

I still hear
the screen door slamming
he left us

greg lammers
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

crime scene
the screen door
banging

--ushi
(0,0,3) = 3 pts


Thirteenth Place -- 2 pts

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