First Place -- 37 points
late summer
corn stalks closing in
on the scarecrow
Melissa Spurr
(3,7,14) = 37 pts
Besides the lovely visual effect in this haiku, I thoroughly enjoy
the gentle irony of the cornstalks "closing in". What a great L2! It
also makes me aware that the scarecrow was almost all that could be
seen in the field earlier in the year and now, it's almost hidden by
the corn.
Second Place -- 21 pts
corn silk--
the baby's hair
holds a spit curl
DeVar
(1,6,6) = 21 pts
Third Place -- 20 pts
thunderhead moon
shucking dry corn
in the porch light
Ron Moss
(1,3,11) = 20 pts
I enjoyed the atmosphere.
Fourth Place -- 16 pts
early moon--
she pats blue corn masa
into perfect circles
Terri L. French
(3,2,3) = 16 pts
I’ve waked to that predawn slapping many times.
Fifth Place -- 15 pts
a Navajo child
clutches her corn husk doll
the orphanage
Carolyn Coit Dancy
(2,3,3) = 15 pts
Sixth Place -- 14 pts
slice of sky
a prairie wind rattles
the corn maze
Catherine J.S. Lee
(0,2,10) = 14 pts
I enjoy the way we begin by seeing the sky, then are moved from
alliteration to the sound of the wind. The use of "rattles" is
wonderful, giving me both a distinct sound and a subtle sense of
agitation.
I love the animation in this one; liked the choice of the word "slice" here.
Seventh Place -- 13 pts
she combs her hair
rows of tasseled corn
curve with the hillside
Elaine Riddell
(1,3,4) = 13 pts
field of corn -
my girl and I look for
her bra
Andrzej Dembonczyk
(0,3,7) = 13 pts
Eighth Place -- 12 pts
parched field
he bends to straighten
a corn stalk
Warren Gossett
(0,3,6) = 12 pts
On first read, this seems like a simple description, but there are
also layers of meaning for me below the surface. I get a sense of an
old man, not only parched by thirst but also withered by life itself.
And yet, here he is, tending his corn as though his life depends upon
it.
I like the contrast here and the appeal to the senses part of which
is intimated rather than stated; as well there is a nice crisp
attitude in the writing of this haiku; this was my favourite of all but I
gave only one point, only because there were so many good ones I
also wanted to score.
Ninth Place -- 11 pts
corn maze entrance
about an hour's walk from...
corn maze entrance
Rafal Zabratynski
(1,2,4) = 11 pts
Really excellent! There is a sense of immediacy, sharing with the
reader the experience through subtle, yet direct, and economical
wording. Perhaps best of all is the Zen humor of however things
change they also stay the same.
Tenth Place -- 10 pts
fresh start
she slices a peach
for our cornflakes
tom painting
(1,2,3) = 10 pts
love this one, what is left unspoken. The special touch she adds to
the cornflakes representing a recommitment to the relationship.
in the cornfield
a faint cry
of a child
Meggy
(0,4,2) = 10 pts
runaway
the cornfield
in her face
Roberta Beary
(0,3,4) = 10 pts
Eleventh Place -- 9 pts
drive-in theater ...
the warm popcorn box
on my lap
Ramona Linke
(0,2,5) = 9 pts
Twelfth Place -- 8 pts
back home---
the corn higher
pockets empty
John Soules
(1,1,3) = 8 pts
family reunion
bright colored maize
row after row
Laurene
(1,0,5) = 8 pts
It might need a little polishing but all the ingredients are there
for a fine verse.
cornfield kiss -
a secret whispered
to the ears
Alexander "Lex" Joy
(0,2,4) = 8 pts
scattered corn-
shadow of the volcano
on the stone altar
KRZYSZTOF PL
(0,2,4) = 8 pts
the sound of the wind
across the cornfields—
prairie summers
Marylouise Knight
(0,0,8) = 8 pts
Thirteenth Place -- 7 pts
windless night
insects owls and the rustle
of growing corn
gourdman
(1,1,2) = 7 pts
Fourteenth Place -- 6 pts
fall field—
corn rows
catch her hair
Janet Marxen
(1,1,1) = 6 pts
autumn night --
the meager corn crop becomes
premium moonshine
Edward
(1,1,1) = 6 pts
Sounds delicious.
butter slathered
from ear to ear
corn cob cook-out
andrea
(0,2,2) = 6 pts
fields of slanted maize yielding whispers
_kala
(0,2,2) = 6 pts
corn planting—
her prayer
in the incense smoke
Ellen Compton
(0,1,4) = 6 pts
state fair-
a gap-toothed boy
buys buttered corn
Devika
(0,1,4) = 6 pts
Fifteenth Place -- 5 pts
a pale of husks
a gathering of children
for the magic of dolls
Merrill Ann Gonzales
(1,1,0) = 5 pts
hot summer day
running through the cornfield
naked as a crow
Sjs Stevie Strang
(0,2,1) = 5 pts
Without line three: my favourite.
hide and seek - -
alarmed crows flock
from the cornfield
Terry O'Connor
(0,1,3) = 5 pts
corn moon
the rustle of silk
in his ears
Francine Banwarth
(0,1,3) = 5 pts
through the tall red dancing heads of poppies a corn field
Andre Surridge
(0,0,5) = 5 pts
cold afternoon --
an old toothless woman
roasting maize
stephen macharia
(0,0,5) = 5 pts
A mixture of pathos and wit.
Without “old” worth more.
corn maze . . .
children's voices shade
from laughter to fear
Bill Pauly
(0,0,5) = 5 pts
Sixteenth Place -- 4 pts
My Polish cousin
Eating his corn on the cob -
Neatly - with a fork!
Conrad Sienkiewicz
(0,2,0) = 4 pts
summer night in the corn field –
they share
the last allergy pill
Aalix Roake
(0,1,2) = 4 pts
corn stubble fields
a buggy obscured
in the driving rain
Jennifer Corpe
(0,1,2) = 4 pts
To the horizon
the gentle wave of corn
with the evening sun
Horst Ludwig
(0,0,4) = 4 pts
This is a firm picture in my head and in my heart.
pop of the roasting corn-
I sink my teeth into
the sound of rain
sanjukta
(0,0,4) = 4 pts
corn silk
ancient designs on the
backstrap loom
Allen McGill
(0,0,4) = 4 pts
his smile
from ear to ear ~
corn festival
Mary Davila
(0,0,4) = 4 pts
Charming.
surrounded by silk
two girls laughing on the stoop
husking corn
Shelley Krause
(0,0,4) = 4 pts
A nice playful scene; I like the liveliness in this haiku.
Seventeenth Place -- 3 pts
Scarecrow guarding corn
Springtime problem for blackbirds
Such super villain
Joseph Spence, Sr.
(1,0,0) = 3 pts
Ears of corn
you make love noises
as we eat.
Trevor Camp
(1,0,0) = 3 pts
farmer's market--
sharing a corn earworm's path
with a stranger
aom (tim)
(1,0,0) = 3 pts
on a country road –
an elaborate sculpture
of an ear of corn
Patricia Prime
(0,1,1) = 3 pts
maize roaster --
golden sparks fly
into the dusk
Isabelle Prondzynski
(0,1,1) = 3 pts
ripening corn-
when did they grow up?
our kids...
DA
(0,1,1) = 3 pts
corn maze...
no sign of the elephant
nor its eye
Scott Mason
(0,0,3) = 3 pts
pecking holes
in the corn bag
our festive chook
Barbara A Taylor
(0,0,3) = 3 pts
a boy chews an
abandoned green maize...
late noon
Catherine Njeri Maina
(0,0,3) = 3 pts
Abandoned: it fascinates and repels.
for children
a maze
in the maize
Barbara Campitelli
(0,0,3) = 3 pts
vociferous murmur
from the maize plantation...
August showers
Patrick Wafula
(0,0,3) = 3 pts