May Kukai

The results of the voting have been tabulated and are listed below. Congratulations to OwenB for winning the Kigo section, and to Allen McGill for winning the Free Format section!
In the listing below, after each poem the author is listed, and then a three digit code revealing how many 3-point, 2-point, and 1-point points were cast for this poem by the other participating poets.

(214 = 12) would indicate that the poem above received two 3-point votes, one 2-point vote, and four 1-point votes.

May 2003 Kukai Results
Kigo Theme: Morning Fog
Free Format Theme: Garden

First Place - 21 points
morning fog
the creak of boats
at anchor

OwenB
(239 = 21)


Second Place - 14 points
morning fog
the sound the river makes
when I close my eyes

Marjorie Buettner
(240 = 14)


Third Place - 12 points
Gettysburg--
a stone hand reaches
through morning fog

Earl Keener
(125 = 12)

first day of school --
the bus slowly taken
by the morning fog

Peter H. Pache
(214 = 12)


Fourth Place - 10 points
morning fog
my father asks me
who i am

roberta beary
(204 = 10)

morning fog
street lamps still
in cocoons

Elaine King
(018 = 10)

morning fog
the muffled horn
precedes the ferry

celia crook
(018 = 10)


Fifth Place - 9 points
morning fog
our initials traced
on the mirror

deborah russell
(017 - 9)


Sixth Place - 7 points
morning fog
village roofs floating
above the cloud

Audrey Downey
(031 = 7)

morning fog--
finally I find
my glasses

Linda P
(015 = 7)

morning fog
softer the sound
of the frogs

mike farley
(023 = 7)

morning fog -
larksong
and the tang of broken ferns

Jon Davey
(120 = 7)


Seventh Place - 6 points
morning fog
a lace over
budding sakura

john tiong chunghoo
(014 = 6)

morning fog. . .
before our second wave
he is gone

sheila windsor
(022 = 6)

morning fog
in the fly rod's arch
a cloud of mayflies

Edward
(014 = 6)

morning fog
a marsh willow drips
in the dead calm

Carol Raisfeld
(014 = 6)

bay bridge
misty spans pin down
the morning fog

Darrell Byrd
(022 = 6)

alone at the wheel
shore lights emerging
from morning fog

Ellen Compton
(022 = 6)


Eighth Place - 5 points
behind the fog
more fog
this autumn morning

r.wilson
(021 = 5)

hot green tea -
rice paper shutters open
to early morning fog

Lynette Arden
(005 = 5)

morning fog -
recognizing my cherry-tree
by blackbird's song

Tom
(013 = 5)

view from the train --
slums cleansed and mysterious
in morning fog

Nancy Smith
(013 = 5)

morning fog
a cardinal stirs
in the willows

Rosa Velt
(005 = 5)


Ninth Place - 4 points
morning fog
my letter of forgiveness to father
still blank

sprite
(020 = 4)

morning fog--
the call of birds whose names
I don't know

Kathy Lippard Cobb
(101 = 4)

morning fog thickens
mashed potatoes and gravy
from the autumn night

Judi Honiker
(101 = 4)

morning fog
a bird song
breaks the stillness

mary duggan
(012 = 4)

morning fog
dogs bark here
and there

Tore Sverredal
(004 = 4)


Tenth Place - 3 points
I sit with coffee
as the morning fog lifts
from fencepost tulips

Zaida Lysle
(011 = 3)

this morning
stealthily stealing tree-trunks
in village orchard

Ruzica
(011 = 3)

morning fog
glimpses of a whale
offshore

Deborah P Kolodji (003 = 3)

morning fog--
birdsongs sound
gently muffled

Mary Lee McClure
(100 = 3)

Low morning fog...
the moon floats from pine to pine
along the road

Zhanna P. Rader
(003 = 3)

driveway paper
lost in morning fog --
red peonies

Ann K. Schwader
(011 = 3)


First Place - 18 points
garden sculptures
children strike poses
near a sunlit wall

Allen McGill
(058 - 18)


Second Place - 16 points
prison garden;
the sunflowers almost as tall
as the fence

Claire Murray
(129 = 16)


Third Place - 13 points
summer garden--
frog and stone bathed
in moonlight

sheila Windsor
(045 = 13)


Fourth Place - 11 points
stripping the garden
of its withered blooms
summer wind

Kate Creighton
(035 = 11)


Fifth Place - 10 points
scent garden ~
a blind man makes a bee line
to the lavender patch

sprite
(131 = 10)

public garden
among the roses
people bowing

Elaine King
(026 = 10)


Sixth Place - 9 points
silk flowers
the neighbor's garden
same as last year

OwenB
(017 = 9)

may morning
a pine tree shadow cuts
the garden in two

DeVar
(106 = 9)


Seventh Place - 8 points
weed garden --
the widower's
tattered coat

mike farley
(032 = 8)


Eigth Place - 7 points
newly single
i restructure
our garden

roberta beary
(112 = 7)

alzheimer's
his vegetable garden
not forgotten

celia crook
(015 = 7)

cascading over
the garden wall
pink bougainvilleas

mary duggan
(112 = 7)


Ninth Place - 6 points
hoe stopped -
a new warbler singing
in the garden

Tom
(103 = 6)

topiary cat
in the public garden
a stray lifts his leg

Nancy Smith
(022 = 6)

mother's garden~
her criticism hovers
with every flower i tend

Pamela A. Babusci (103 = 6)

rejected tomato
left in the garden
busy flies

oino sakai
(014 = 6)

ceiling shadows ...
a spray of stars
on the garden pond

Carol Raisfeld
(111 = 6)

desert garden
spring tomatoes among
winter chard

Darrell Byrd
(111 = 6)

Rain-fresh garden...
my autumn work bursts
into tulips

Zhanna P. Rader
(103 = 6)

he picks a rose
from her mother's garden
first date

Deborah P Kolodji
(006 = 6)


Tenth Place - 5 points
early may walk
behind those high garden walls
the lilacs bloom

Edward
(102 = 5)

bursting
with wild poppies -
her rock garden

Carole MacRury
(005 = 5)


Eleventh Place - 4 points
garden party
a desert scorpion
enters uninvited

Carmel C. Lively
(012 = 4)


Twelfth Place - 3 points
Leave my garden
now, aphid!
ladybug's coming

r.wilson
(011 = 3)

spring garden
the squirrel digs
another hole

Martin Gottlieb Cohen
(003 = 3)

yesterday garden
full of life and color
seldom blooms now

Zaida Lysle
(011 = 3)

garden swings
swaying to and fro
summer breezes

Leslie Leon
(011 = 3)

spring morn --
smell of turned soil
old garden

Peter H. Pache
(003 = 3)

garden statue
a king snake slithers
into the brush

Kathy Lippard Cobb
(011 = 3)

in our garden
a hummingbird arrives
with the landscape crew

Joann
(011 = 3)

window garden
on the pansy's face
a shaft of sunlight

Betty
(011 = 3)

at the garden gate
beams red roses and romance
beneath moonlit glow

Judi Honiker
(100 = 3)

first radish --
garden dirt on my fingers
almost warm

Ann K. Schwader
(011 = 3)

mossy garden--
the peacock
shows his tail

Mary Lee McClure
(003 = 3)

garden's edge -
the cat
eyeing a crow

Jon Davey
(011 = 3)

garden party
laughter tumbles along
a honeysuckle breeze

soji
(011 = 3)

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