In the listing below, after each poem the author is listed, and then a three digit code revealing how many 3-point, 2-point, and 1-point votes were cast for this poem by the other participating poets. (214 = 12) would indicate that the poem above received two 3-point votes, one 2-point vote, and four 1-point votes.

May 2004 Kukai Results
Kigo Theme: Beetle
Free Format Theme: Sunset

First Place -- 22 Points

full moon
a beetle carves some light
from a lily

Paul Pfleuger, Jr.
(3,3,7) = 22


Second Place -- 16 Points

in spring sun -
a black beetle's
true colors . . .

Carole MacRury
(0,3,10) = 16


Third Place -- 15 Points

garden party
a red beetle lands
on her hat

Audrey Downey
(1,2,8) = 15


Fourth Place -- 14 Points

moon sliver
the crunch of a beetle
beneath my bare foot

Joshua Gage
(2,2,4) = 14


Fifth Place -- 12 Points

summer heat --
a ladybird beetle
crosses my navel

Peter H. Pache
(0,2,8) = 12


Sixth Place -- 10 Points

spring noon
beetles brighten
the wood pile

martin
(0,3,4) = 10


Seventh Place -- 9 Points

finger wiggles
he invents a Sign
for "beetle"

ushi
(2,1,1) = 9

no calls today
the screen-porch beetle
in yesterday's spot

roberta beary
(0,3,3) = 9


Eighth Place -- 7 Points

best dressed beetle
in the garden
ladybug

Patricia A. Laurent
(0,2,3) = 7

deadfall pine
a beetle aims its backside
skyward

Darrell Byrd
(0,2,3) = 7

tornado warning
a dark brown beetle
spins on it's back

Ed Markowski
(1,0,4) = 7

origami folds--
a lady beetle's wings
draw under her shell

DeVar
(0,0,7) = 7


Ninth Place -- 6 Points

green iridescence
of the scarab beetle
desert breeze

Allen McGill
(0,1,4) = 6

Morning Glory
a beetle reflects
sunlight

Juanito
(0,1,4) = 6

warm sun by the sea -
she lets the beetle journey
the length of her leg

Zhanna P. Rader
(0,1,4) = 6

beetle
with each step
your shadow moves along

aom
(0,1,4) = 6

biology lab
cringing at the beetle
in a jar

jane burton
(1,0,3) = 6

moonlit night
beetles making love
near a dung ball

Flatline
(0,1,4) = 6


Tenth Place -- 5 Points

weekend get-away
whirlygig beetles scatter
from my reflection

Earl Keener
(1,0,2) = 5

spring floral dress
a beetle follows
her to work

john tiong chunghoo
(0,1,3) = 5

mountain hike --
the gecko enjoys
a wood beetle

Carol Raisfeld
(0,2,1) = 5

cotton string --
a June beetle circles
the laughing boy

Edward
(0,2,1) = 5

late for work
a beetle makes its way
across the windshield

Aruna
(0,0,5) = 5

woodpecker's beak
so close to the beetle
spring mist

ORIGA
(1,1,0) = 5

late spring sun
the blue sheen of a crow
and beetle

Cliff Roberts
(0,2,1) = 5


Eleventh Place -- 4 Points

sunny day.
a beetle is dying
upside down.

Sergio Francisco Pichorim
(1,0,1) = 4

deathwatch--
even the beetle
will not stay

Kathy Lippard Cobb
(0,1,2) = 4

bark beetles
a stand of pine browns
behind the cabin

Deborah P Kolodji
(0,1,2) = 4

old man napping -
a beetle leaves the warmth
of the compost heap

Norman Darlington
(0,1,2) = 4

my grandson
and his jar of beetles
counting sheep

peigi
(0,1,2) = 4

"The Last Samurai"
a lone helmet beetle clings
to an ancient pine

Carmen Sterba
(0,2,0) = 4


Twelfth Place -- 3 Points

hot fans
at the airport
an old beetle

paula fisher
(0,0,3) = 3

a June beetle
wings into it:
summer dawn

Robert
(0,1,1) = 3

only playing dead
beetle in goldfish pond
see she crawls away.

Zaida Lysle
(0,1,1) = 3

summer cottage
we evict a large beetle
from the shower

Owen Burkhart
(0,0,3) = 3

evening whispers
a may beetle
breaks the silence

Grzegorz Sionkowski
(0,1,1) = 3

after swallowing
a beetle - tulip keeps on
buzzing and buzzing

Boris Nazansky
(0,0,3) = 3

sultry summer evening
turning on the light
beetles in the bath

Tomislav Maretic
(0,1,1) = 3

at night -
ticking on the floor
of beetle paws

Cornelia
(0,0,3) = 3

empty matchbox -
her pet beetle just escaped
followed by a sigh

Nancy Smith
(0,0,3) = 3


First Place -- 33 Points

sunset
the skin of the orange
still warm

sheila windsor
(3,6,12) = 33


Second Place -- 15 Points

prairie sunset
the glow of the cattleman's
branding iron

Ed Markowski
(1,3,6) = 15

sunset
no one
looks east

Grzegorz Sionkowski
(1,4,4) = 15


Third Place -- 11 Points

sunset
my shadow grows
with each step

ORIGA
(1,3,2) = 11


Fourth Place -- 10 Points

sunset
a red balloon
trails its string

ushi
(0,4,2) = 10

sunset --
in a drop of resin
on the pine

Dubravko Marijanovic
(0,2,6) = 10

sunset
the flicker of the first
firefly

Cliff Roberts
(1,2,3) = 10


Fifth Place -- 9 Points

sunset
black locust blossoms
lighten the trail

Robert B.
(1,2,2) = 9

strawberry sunset--
the baby's hand closes
over my finger

Kathy Lippard Cobb
(1,0,6) = 9

in the silence
of an orange sunset -
the stroke of our oars

Carole MacRury
(0,3,3) = 9


Sixth Place -- 8 Points

sunset
her blonde hair sparkles
in the wind

john tiong chunghoo
(0,2,4) = 8

sunset
two silhouettes
holding hands

gb
(0,2,4) = 8


Seventh Place -- 7 Points

sunset
the first porch light visible
on the horizon

Earl Keener
(0,1,5) = 7

sunset -
the face of East Rock
begins to blush

Audrey Downey
(0,2,3) = 7

painting
no colours to match
the sunset

Kylie Hooklyn
(0,2,3) = 7

sunset --
a warmed beer bottle
on the table

Tomislav Maretic
(0,0,7) = 7

sunset
the coolness of your skin
on mine

Aruna
(0,0,7) = 7

sunset
making herself up
for the night

Flatline
(0,2,3) = 7


Eighth Place -- 5 Points

bikini buttocks
baby mosquitos
wait for sunset

Carmel C. Lively
(0,0,5) = 5


Ninth Place -- 4 Points

sunset
in tiffany's crystal dish
rainbow sherbet

Brenda Roberts
(0,2,0) = 4

snowy owl
in the tree top
sunset

Patricia A. Laurent
(0,1,2) = 4

Summer sunset -
one after another
the glow worms

Vasile Moldovan
(0,1,2) = 4

front porch rocking chairs.
sunset at the nursing home.
not a vacant seat.

Adnil
(0,1,2) = 4

Papayas
sunrise / sunset
in each half

Owen Burkhart
(0,0,4) = 4

sunset long past --
by the empty bed
a clock ticks

Laryalee Fraser
(0,1,2) = 4

radio
a favorite song fades
at sunset

James M. Thompson
(0,1,2) = 4

timeshare sunset
tasting the mix
in the margarita

roberta beary
(0,1,2) = 4

sunset
light climbs
to the top of the trees

aom
(0,1,2) = 4

father..
how many sunsets?

Christy
(0,1,2) = 4


Tenth Place -- 3 Points

crows sing
through the spring trees
sunset

martin
(0,0,3) = 3

Trooping home,
cowboys and indians
at sunset

Mark Staniforth
(0,1,1) = 3

autumn sunset
no more
swallows

Peter H. Pache
(0,1,1) = 3

sunset
beyond the Sierras
a new sunrise

Allen McGill
(1,0,0) = 3

shift change --
opposite the setting sun
full moon rises

a. callister
(0,1,1) = 3

small garden
all the sunflowers watch
the sun set

Juanito
(0,1,1) = 3

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