First Place Twenty-eight Points
autumn
the sky grows bigger
by one leaf
April Serock
(2,5,12) = 28 Pts
A beauty. Something we've all experienced but this makes me feel that I'm seeing it for the first time.
A nice shift of perspective.
Second Place Twenty-four Points
autumn . . .
a spider takes over
the watering can
sheila windsor
(1,5,11) = 24 Pts
Third Place Nineteen Points
autumn chill
the church fills
with the smell of mothballs
Jacek M
(2,2,9) = 19 Pts
autumn breeze
a dragonfly skims sunlight
off the pond
Keiko Izawa
(1,5,6) = 19 Pts
a field
of faceless pumpkins...
Autumn begins
ed markowski
(0,3,13) = 19 Pts
I like that phrase, 'faceless pumpkins', for Jack O' Lanterns-to-be.
Fourth Place Seventeen Points
autumn dusk
an old man bends
to the earth
Melissa Spurr
(0,5,7) = 17 Pts
Fifth Place Sixteen Points
autumn
trees undressing
leaf by leaf
Frances McCarthy
(0,5,6) = 16 Pts
An interesting reversal.
Sixth Place Fourteen Points
autumn evening
a phone call from the friend
who lives alone
Bill Kenney
(0,2,10) = 14 Pts
Simultaneously brings to mind the coziness of friendship and the cool shiver of loneliness.
Seventh Place Twelve Points
late autumn
a lone aspen leaf
resists the wind
Warren Gossett
(0,3,6) = 12 Pts
I like the word resist used here.
Eighth Place Eleven Points
leaves raked
a boy jumps
into autumn
Roberta Beary
(1,1,6) = 11 Pts
I love this image. It's full of life - a timeless story, beautifully told.
So well crafted... just seven words yet rich in image and motion.
lazy river
a few poplar leaves drift
toward autumn
polona
(0,2,7) = 11 Pts
A beauty. Something we've all experienced but this makes me feel that I'm seeing it for the first time.
Ah . . . such a gentle poem. Lazy and drift . . . wonderful.
Ninth Place Ten Points
autumn dawn
a chimney belches
its swifts
Barbara Snow
(1,3,1) = 10 Pts
a granddaughter
leads her through the corn maze
autumn deepens
tom painting
(0,3,4) = 10 Pts
autumn rain
a tattooed man sells
permanent markers
Israel Lopez Balan
(0,3,4) = 10 Pts
autumn lingers
my father's coat still smells
like him
Earl Keener
(0,3,4) = 10 Pts
Tenth Place Nine Points
crisp autumn morning
a deer sips at the blue lake
artist paint is dry
Rebecca S.
(1,2,2) = 9 Pts
morning fog and
faint light from the bakery
early autumn
Boris Nazansky
(1,2,2) = 9 Pts
autumn fields
a few wisps of mist
in the stubble
Jan O'Loughlin
(0,1,7) = 9 Pts
autumn night
we lose ourselves
in the corn maze
Beth Powell
(0,1,7) = 9 Pts
Hadn't heard of 'corn maze' before. Interesting concept and a well formed haiku.
Autumn evening
the hoot owl tires
of answering me
Terri L. French
(0,0,9) = 9 Pts
Serene, almost teased sentiment, making the best of the last few moments of summer.
The dependable call-and-response breaking down... feels very autumnal.
Eleventh Place Eight Points
Dad's wedding ring
begins to loosen . . .
autumn rain
Alice Frampton
(0,2,4) = 8 Pts
autumn sunshine:
she finds a dime
in the grass
Raquel Bailey
(0,2,4) = 8 Pts
early autumn rain
the darkening beach
all mine
Jon Baldwin
(0,1,6) = 8 Pts
autumn air
the koi fish rise
in my shadow
Harvey Jenkins
(0,1,6) = 8 Pts
Twelfth Place Seven Points
like an autumn leaf
first night in my new flat
even the moon has moved
Hermione
(1,2,0) = 7 Pts
I love this unusual comparison.
for a pinch of grain
koi splatter the pond
in autumn colors
Michael McClintock
(0,2,3) = 7 Pts
more rain
and a kitchen cricket
autumn songs
Shelley Krause
(0,2,3) = 7 Pts
There is something cozy about these sounds.
Love the combination of sounds in this one and the contrast of the wet/dry imagery.
autumn walk
in a colourful forest
a grey couple
max verhart
(0,0,7) = 7 Pts
long autumn evening
the musty smell
of old book
Dorota Pyra
(0,0,7) = 7 Pts
Thirteenth Place Six Points
the bell buoy
barely a silhouette
august fog
Carol Raisfeld
(0,2,2) = 6 Pts
You can feel the ocean cool.
I opened the door
and autumn
blew rain in my face
helge t.
(0,2,2) = 6 Pts
no autumn yet
this autumn
Robert Ertman
(0,1,4) = 6 Pts
This one was the one I felt compelled to read aloud to my partner, and the one that stayed with me all week.
words unspoken
in the chillness of the evening
autumn leaves
Fred Flohr
(0,1,4,) = 6 Pts
Autumn rain
the smell of trees
turning
Marylouise Knight
(0,1,4) = 6 Pts
autumn equinox
we agree to split
the child support
Mauree Pendergrast
(0,1,4) = 6 Pts
Fourteenth Place Five Points
ripe peaches
and six geese overhead
...autumn rising
Jeff Hanson
(0,2,1) = 5 Pts
these autumn mountains
even a ghost
would leave prints...
Kurt R. W.
(0,1,3) = 5 Pts
unfolding autumn
a stray cat quietly sits
at the front door
Origa
(0,1,3) = 5 Pts
autumn equinox
shadows slant from the trees
at new angles
Catherine J.S. Lee
(0,1,3) = 5 Pts
Fifteenth Place Four Points
a long drive
autumn leaves
in hot pursuit
Sunil Uniyal
(0,2,0) = 4 Pts
now in a small box
the ring that hugged my finger
Autumn came too soon
Betty Kaplan
(0,1,2) = 4 Pts
tumbling down
the mountainside
tie-dye autumn
Darrell Lindsey
(0,1,2) = 4 Pts
Autumn passing
Last leaf on a bare tree
Captured by the wind
James Sawers
(0,2,0) = 4 Pts
autumn wind
the lower clouds outrun
the higher ones
Isabelle Prondzynski
(0,0,4) = 4 Pts
autumn sun
a rainbow ...
no, two
og_a
(0,1,2) = 4 Pts
A perfectly caught moment.
another argument ~
a dry autumn leaf
rolled up tight
Paul Hodder
(0,0,4) = 4 Pts
The spirit becomes weary of conflict. We close ourselves off even when doing so might portend a sort of psychic falling and death, what the alchemists call negredo. In the long run closing off may also lead to spring, a psychic rebirth.
turkey feathers
on grandma's hat
autumn funeral
Meggy
(0,1,2) = 4 Pts
so much season
in the reedy voice
of the cricket
Paul O. Williams
(0,1,2) = 4 Pts
waltzing golden birch
in autumn evening dress
starry night jewels
Jon Espen Vassbotn
(1,0,1) = 4 Pts
in the space
between summer and autumn
purple flowers
carol pearce-worthington
(0,0,4) = 4 Pts
morning haze
a seaplane lifts
into autumn
Susan Constable
(0,0,4) = 4 Pts
the silence
in the shadows
autumn dusk
Sjs
(0,1,2) = 4 Pts
autumn dampness
the deep-fried scent
of the tavern
Jennifer Corpe
(0,0,4) = 4 Pts
autumn freight
cold rails groan louder
in the dark
ruthanne
(0,1,2) = 4 Pts
Autumn
fading colors of leaves
nothing but naked trees
Watpliwy
(1,0,1) = 4 Pts
Sixteenth Place Three Points
autumn colours
do you remember
our first kiss?
Daniela Bullas
(0,1,1) = 3 Pts
Autumn is my life.
Not quite spring, not quite summer.
But never winter.
Tanja Cilia
(0,1,1) = 3 Pts
Autumn rain
picking colors from the tree
I color my hair
Ben Gieske
(0,0,3) = 3 Pts
I feel autumn
even in the kiss: a cold nose
and warm lips
Tomislav M.
(1,0,0) = 3 Pts
All is dwindling
Shorter days...and years
Autumn closes in
Mary E. Gray
(0,1,1) = 3 Pts
autistic woman . . .
autumn comes hard
in spite of her song
Bill Pauly
(0,1,1) = 3 Pts
autumn morn
a loon calls across
the placid lake
Meredith Cavalieri
(0,0,3) = 3 Pts
autumn chill
the young geese try out
running on water
Marlθne Buitelaar
(0,1,1) = 3 Pts
deep into autumn
browsing through online albums
to keep the room warm
Cristian Mocanu
(0,0,3) = 3 Pts
doe prints
where she stopped
for an autumn wind
Dan Schwerin
(1,0,0) = 3 Pts
Seventeenth Place Two Points
the last rose
in a garden going wild
autumn distress sale
Garry Eaton
(0,0,2) = 2 Pts
she cannot climb
the steps anymore
autumn gets in her way
anonymous
(0,1,0) = 2 Pts
bird watching
the autumn leaves
in the silent air
anonymous
(0,0,2) = 2 Pts
Uncalled guest,
the autumn wind
flings the gate open
Vasile Moldovan
(0,0,2) = 2 Pts
A butterfly shivering
last days in autumn
shadows and dust.
Ashi
(0,1,) = 2 Pts
autumn stalks the hills
wearing sun as a disguise
summer is the prey
Deirdre Godwin
(0,0,2) = 2 Pts
autumn
caterpillar
to butterfly
peter
(0,1,0) = 2 Pts
autumn rain
a collage of
wet maple leaves
anonymous
(0,0,2) = 2 Pts
autumn mornings
I walk with
renewed vigour
Ruth Powell
(0,0,2) = 2 Pts
autumn harvest...
above the grass
squirrel tails sprouting
anonymous
(0,0,2) = 2 Pts
mooncake festival
just two floating lanterns
of autumn lovers
renaye lo
(0,0,2) = 2 Pts
autumn decay
a broken leaf blower
behind the shed
Garry Gay
(0,0,2) = 2 Pts
ants lose
their way in the cracks . . .
autumn leaves
Mary Davila
(0,0,2) = 2 Pts
autumn light
even the shadows
take on warmth
anonymous
(0,0,2) = 2 Pts
Eighteenth Place One Point
first month
of autumn
cicadas
miriam chaikin
autumn wine
the ripest berries
on the vines
bre
Straight lines, Natures temple,
I know you are the one.
Autumn is a God.
Shannon Skillman
autumn ballet
Chopin's waltz
drifts out the window
Shernaz Wadia
touching a dragonfly
touching a faded daylily
early autumn
Bruce Ross
autumn rain
inside the dusty husks
shiny sweet corn
Lin Geary
yearly reminder
summer has come and has gone
the cool autumn breeze
todd eddy
Autumn apples
rot beneath bent trees
Yositaka
the leaves rustle.
hammock swings.
autumn winds.
Jozuah Darksong
before winter's snow
autumn's magic touch
Indian summer
Edward
slowly droplets slide
down the rusty spokes--
autumn drizzle
DeVar
that autumn night
on my bedroom window
branches knocking
emile molhuysen
almost autumn
a hockey puck
in the petunias
Neil Moylan
Must be a Canadian! It's never too early to start playing street hockey. And the sounds hockey/puck/petunias are lovely.
autumn dusk
the air threads floating
over the field
Miorita
Autumn
reveals her
true colors
1bodhisattva
autumn begins
on the same green branch
the first yellow leaf
vishnu kapoor
in my autumn days
recollecting how old dreams
vanished like blossoms
Philip Ashton
between autumn storms
blue wildflowers
cupping the last light
Marilyn Hazelton
autumn harvest
the crescent is reaping
moorlands
Iga
autumn coolness...
how father expects
he'll go
anonymous
autumn
the terminal velocities
of reds and yellows
Mike Montreuil
autumn 's feast
our glasses raised
to different thanks
Wendy Kabiri
Nineteenth Place Sorry, no points this time.
chill in her voice
and cold, withering stare,
autumn becomes her
if
silent trees
autumn
for the cicadas
Bill Hudson
With roaring winds
the trees wave all night:
autumn in courtyard
R.K.Singh
autumn coming...
a girl with golden hair
turns into the wind
Josh Wikoff
after their visit
autumn stays behind
with golden leaves
anonymous
bright fall foliage
nirvana for leaf peepers
until next autumn
Jyothirmai Gubili
autumn leaves
and sunset reflected in
mountain lake
Jim Applegate
7th of September
the first glimpse of autumn
on a web-cam
Laurene Post
Autumn gale
flies in the face of the moon
wind-blown spindrift
Janice Hornburg
awaiting autumn
I surrender to the
burning sun
Elena Naskova
hurry woolly bear
this autumn path's too damp
for butterflies
andrea
Summers glow
within autumn shadows
sleeping seedlings
Tina
autumn wind all leaves on the bend
Magdalena Banaszkiewicz
Blue jays call
tall trees wave their arms
autumn noise.
Trevor Camp
fading autumnscape
flashes by
unfolding new canvas
cire
Autumn
the sunny south..
still green
terrytip
autumn sweaters
cede the closet shelf
to folded shorts
gourdman
a color explosion
warms the cooling air--
autumn mardi gras
Pearl
autumn festival
on her neck again
last year's amber
john tiong chunghoo
autumn
around the corner
baby peek-a-boos
Agnes Eva Savich
voices and footsteps
again on the sidewalk
autumn follows
deanna tief
children chase minnows
in the almost-dry creek ...
autumn heat
Bridget Cougar
autumn light
I fling the bee's stinger
to the ground
jt
autumn pond
some of the ripples
begin at the surface
Joyce Clement
summer plants erect
then...falling, falling...autumn
drops them down til spring
dragonfly
autumn moves
a last mow of the lawn
before snowbirds fly south
jim swift
more starts
I guess tonight
autumn breeze
Reza-Iran
forest walk
eyes and pockets filled with
autumn mosaics
Dejan Pavlinovic
early autumn heat
with the waxing moon
a moonflower unfolds
jill
autumn's harbingers
first bronze leaf curls on the tree
cravings for soups and stews
Hazel A. Witherspoon
bank teller
using the ATM
autumn rain
Gene Doty
trees careen in
the air current
autumn parking
Lech Szeglowski
autumn hillside
curves onto river
train through sky
anonymous
autumn storm
air conditioner
silenced
LGD
autumn starts
my vacation ends
Labor Day
gillena
Warm autumn evening
poems made easy
scribbles on paper
George Hazard